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for Working out the Paradox

by chayron

person mizu_majutsu
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was an amazing chapter. I really liked the...er...smut part (OF COURSE!!!), and also the part where Wolfram acquired Yuuri's powers. Very touching indeed. Oh and the way you ended this chapter (the swallowing thing)...PRICELESS!!! Love it! Hope you update soon! :)
person White_Youkai
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gosh! I love this story! It's really great! Please, do not stop and continue. I can't wait till the next chapter! Keep it up!
P.S. Man tikrai labai patiko si istorija. Negaliu patiketi, kad tu ne is Anglijos. Tavo anglu kalba nuostabi. Noreciau ir as taip puikiai rasyti. Be to, labai malonu kai pamatai ka nors is savo krasto.^_^ Dievinu Kyo Kara Maoh, ir si istorija tikrai nuostabi. Man patinka kaip tu sukurei Wolframo ir Yuuri charakterius. O paskutine scena buvo tikrai iomi. Nesitikejau tokio posukio ir tai dar labiau patrauke mano demesi. Beje, kur dingo greitosios pagalbos masina? Ka padare Shioris? Yay! Man taip smalsu! Prasau, GREICIAU atnauink! IKI! ^_~ Lauksiu!
person liyasha85
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic of yours! Can't wait for the next chap and see what Wolf and Yuuri get up to next. Have to say that the way you portrayed Yuuri as a hetero guy into a bi/gay one is great. Have to say that Wolf/Yuuri are one of fave gay couples.
person kagomegirl
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that sure gives a new meaning to sex hahaha update again soon!!
person BOE_4eva
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BWAH, i reveiwed ff.net as well... but this is the one i read, so ill review here too BWAH
AWESOME!! YAY!!!
Im so happy you are updating so freaquently, it puts me to shame!
And i cant wait for the next instalment!!!
person Marieka
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eeep you updated before I got to review the last chapter ... shame on me. YaY Updates!!!

chap. 18 ~ absolutely loved it! I thought Yuuri may have trouble with things moving along so fast but Wolfram was really aware of him and conciderate. So sweet.

chap. 19 ~ o.O; ooh noos ... and yes I'm laughing already *snickers* but still that can be pretty scary ... almost loosing the love he just found. You are so evil. *smirks*

Thank you so much for sharing. I look forward to s'more and I'll do my best to keep reviewing.
person Marieka
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes I'm reviewing again -.-;

I forgot to mention how much fun it was to see Yuuri become such a nympho.
I always found the Pringles metaphor for sex so appropo: "Once you pop, you just cant stop!"

*coughs and looks embarassed* Well, we are all pervs here right?
Well it's out of my system now.

Thanks again for sharing!
person the enigma
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD HAHAHA...all cause he swallowed!!
person cocoke5
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was a powerful chapter for them and wolfman swollw and the powers and yuuui help him i love that and ihopethat they are okay ant that they stay togeter. up date soon.
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!! I love how you twisted that towards the end, definatly something new! Fantastic chapter, as always!

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