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phweee that was kind of...unexpected, perhaps even random. This fic seemed so uncrazy...like...roar, its hard to explain. I've read some fics where they invent random magics and laws just to enhance plot. I honestly never liked when people did that, it takes more skill to work off of what is given to them just from the story. And, while you used an OC, you managed to make him believable in the story. There is an exception to the 'random magic' thing, which is the author takes time to explain fully why this rule is part of their society and also makes it believable to the story. It's up to what you think, but arbitrary magic is usually used as a means for an excuse of addition of drama. I'm waiting in eager anticipation to see how you explain this strange new magic of the Mazoku. Other than that, another awesome chapter that made me extremely happy to read!! ^_^

Chapter 19

I'm glad that Wolfram and Yuuri are discovering new things. But I think they need to get that swapping thing worked out.

More please. :-)

Hey! I'm reviewing over here now (obviously). I don't like my stories censored, no siree.
I was just watching the latest English release of the anime, and went online for my fic fix, and was ever so delighted to see one of my favorite stories had a new chapter. A very hot, very good chapter at that! ^u^ I like Asami, he seems cool, and it's always fun to see Wolfram adapting to Earth life.
Looking forward to reading more!

Love,
lucymaypotter (from ffnet)

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! This was one...hot...chapter!!! I almost self-combust after reading over the material. :) Amazing work, yet again! I do hope you update real soon! :)

Yes! An update! I felt like I was waiting forever but it was certainly worth the wait! Nice smexy scene! ^_^

wow yuur and wolfman way to go. can not wait for the next chapter of the storyand see if they go all the way. and get back home and get have a good life.

This has become my fave KKM fanfic. I should really stop reading unfinished fanfiction though. I just want to keep reading but I can't because there isn't any more to read yet, I'll be unbelievably sad if you don't finish this. Occationally you have them speaking a bit too formally for the situation, or something doesn't make sense (maybe getting yourself a beta isn't such a bad idea, just to refine whats already so good) but that doesn't take away from anything more then me having to sort out what you mean in my head. Few more seconds doesn't hurt anyone.
Pitty you don't like Greta but then again we're all here for the Yuuram. *drools over last chapter next to Gunter and tisues* careful or you'll actually give my virgin self a nosebleed.

btw, I looked at what else you had up and it made me chuckle to see that they were all DBZ. Someone likes their dragon ball, then again I can remember when I was like that with Naruto.

Hi! I will write you a review in an email once again, ok?! ^^

This is an excellent piece of work. I read this first many months ago and I keep coming back for more. I like the slow, detailed character development. Specifically how Yuuri had a change of perspective that led him to accept Wolfgram's love. Great plot. I can't wait to read more about how they develop their love from here. Great job!

Delicious chapter!! That was indeed my favorite so far. :P Very, very anxiously awaiting the next chapter!