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Chapter 18

Well done! The setting and the series of evens really pushed things forward. :) Also Wolfram learning Yuuri's native language would be great.

I wait with anticipation of what will happen in the next chapter!

OMG! Yay! That's about all I can say to this chapter. lol. I'm glad you didn't just jump right into full blown sex. You made the whole moment endearing and special(in a masculine way. lol.)

HELL YEAH!! OMG i love it! that's sooo good! I think you successfully captured the essence of naivete and patrial reluctance on Yuuri's part. I'm glad you aren't one of those fics writers who just makes Yuuri automatically really confident and sexually aware. And making Wolfram learned but not all too confident either was really good too. Kudos! and I can't wait til the next chapter, i seriously check this site everyday for an update lol

You´re great. What else can I say? I wouldn´t add or take out a comma. It´s wonderful
And i´m actually believing that, the way you put it, a straight guy can actually become gay. I give you the pulitzer for fanfictions ^^

Shopping time! I can't wait to see what happens there! But I feel sorry for Yuuri, he was only trying to help. Damn that Kouta! Wolfrem, hurry up and get over him I say! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Poor Yuuri! Poor Wolfram! This chapter was good, I had my eyes glued to the screen and couldn't stop reading until it finished! But how is Yuuri going to convince Wolfram that he didn't purposly leave him there as a punishment. It seems to only get worse and worse for Yuuri, that means it can only get better, right....right? I can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow, they finally made up! Take that Kouta! And a baseball game coming up, ooh I wonder how Wolfram will react and if they will get closer. This story has been so good, I've been loving every chapter of it and I can't wait for the next!

hmmmmmmm
I just really like this story.
I think you portray the characters very differently than most other fics I've read but they are really believable and the angst is just right. The only slight criticism I might have is that in the last chapter Wolfram accepted Yuri a bit too easily. Especially the line where he said it would be tricky to explain to Kyota. It sounded to me as if he was talking about a pebble in his shoe. And Wolfram ought to be a bit more understanding since he kinda was in Kyota's shoes only a little while ago. But really I enjoy your story the most and I've gotten so cought up in it.
I was the one that made the about "Yuuri courting Wolfram properly" and I have to say I have been blisfully appeased. I like how you portray Yuuri in that situation. In most fics he's clueless and blushes etc.. but I really like how you work frustration in his character without making him childish.
Needless to say I can't wait for more and two weeks of not updating has me nail-biting.
Thanks for your wonderful fic.

WEll I would like to say first off that I have just recently started watching the series and after reading through your fiction I have to say that you have done a job well done. It is hard to right any kind of fiction and this is a great one . I think that you have captured the personal mind set of both Yuir and Wolfram. Any ways cant wait to read the next chapter and the ending should be a blast. A side note if you need anything at all the help complete your vision just ask im alwasy looking to lend a helping hand,.

Wahhh, I ran out of chapters. xD

I'm really enjoying your story. I love the way you made Yuuri fall in love with Wolfram or you know, realize that he did.

I was up until 2:00am reading this and ended up getting maybe 4 hours of sleep and even though I'm tired as hell I had to finish what you had out. hehe

Anyway, can't wait until I see a new chapter from you. Keep up the great work!