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for Working out the Paradox

by chayron

person NoisyStillness
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! They finally kissed and made up XD
At least there's still issues to be resolved >3 >> And that the kissing didn't lead straight to sex. XP

It was a cute chapter ^^ but I wonder what's gonna happen at the baseball game Oo *shakes head* Wolfram never has a clue in the human world.
person KaraQ
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
.....I love you...really :-) <3
This chapter really made me go; Awwww... some of the time. I still think those two have a lot of issues to work out, especially Yuuri. But I really do hope he'll have learned to be more sensitive to Wolfram's feelings now. I'm also really glad you didn't just made them jump each other after 'the confession'. There's been one to many fics like that. it's much better with all the small touches to begin with... and then they can smex each other silly!!!! ^^
Great work, hon! I love to see updates from you.

~KaraQ
person KaraQ
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Where the F*** is the rest of my review? (Yes, I do read some of your other reviews...I'm geeky like that) ^^
I think it went somethin like this:
.....I love you...really :-) <3
This chapter really made me go; Awwww... some of the time. I still think those two have a lot of issues to work out, especially Yuuri. But I really do hope he'll have learned to be more sensitive to Wolfram's feelings now. I'm also really glad you didn't just made them jump each other after 'the confession'. There's been one to many fics like that. it's much better with all the small touches to begin with... and then they can smex each other silly!!!! ^^
Great work, hon! I love to see updates from you.

~KaraQ
person KaraQ
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Sigh* I think I'll just go copy my REAL review into fanfiction.net.
Sorry about that...
person chrono_ofDarkness
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't commented in a while. I didn't have access to the internet over the holiday. But I'm so glad they've finally talked and cleared up their misunderstanings. That chapter made me relive a similar experience. lol. It's going to be difficult to break the news to Kyota though and i can't wait to read that. He's not the type to give up so easily. lol.
person Webtester01
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I'm glad they got that out of the way. :) Good thing the old lady didn't fall out of the window. But hope they enjoy their next outing. Keep up the great work!
person little_star
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O please god dont let yuuri be uke. >@<;;
hello favorite author, have you been well? <33 sorry i havent been reviewing lately, but im here now! ^^
at first i was bit confused why youd bring both of them to earth (i really prefer the other world as the setting--ive have enough of earth. *cough*) but i guess its the only way they can be alone and sort things out~ since there are too many elements on the demon world that can be intrusive... and its funny how they can argue one minute and get along the next O_O i guess its really like that for some people, bc i cant help but be irritated when i have a fight and be in the same room after the arguement >_<;; ah but thats just me and my intolerant nature XXD
Aww no melodramatic make up scene! >_<;; i was expecting it to be soap-opera like with wolfram's angst and all~ hehe but the kiss-and-make-up is cute as well :) (no make up smex? nyahaha)
And i thought Asami was a girl. XD
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! I really, really loved this one. I think this is my favorite chapter so far. :)
person Marieka
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YaY!!! Update! *dances like a loon* Loved it Loved it Loved it! Thank you so much for sharing. I look forward to reading s'more.

*snickers* Web shared something with me I hadnt thought about, poor Yuuri stuck in an elevator for an hour having to go to the bathroom. Makes for quite a visual.

I'm sure you will enjoy Eragon, great graphics and great actors. It just didnt follow the book. I will have to see it for myself at some point, but at least I wont have expectations of it being true to the book.
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Calm down dear! I didn't mean it to sound that way. Most of the words I was speaking of were spelled incorectly because of the word being typed twice, or too many, or not enough spaces. I know some times things like the type of site you post the text on can do these things, so it may have been that, please don't take offense to my bit of critasizm.
I was not complaning about your spelling of words like blond/blonde, I have plently of friends who are english & part of my familys Irish. Gomen Nasai anyway.

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