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Hmmm...Still feeling kinda sorry for Yuuri. Seems everyone is against him.
But Wolfram thinking Yuuri left him made me all teary-eyed. I felt so bad for him (although him even thinking Yuuri could be that cruel baffles me...)
I demand a little bit of fluff!!!!! *is nearly dead from all the angst* .......please?! *puppy eyes*
I know angst makes a story, but this chapter really had my heart hammering. Poor Wolfy. But you said something about writing 20-22 chapter all in all? *Sigh* I wonder if Yuuri just'll end up being noble and just wanting Wolfram to be happy even though it means marrying Kyota. ........Nooooooo.....
Ahem, anyways...Lovely chapter as always and I really can't find any grammar mistakes. Your'e just too great. Lol. Please update soon :-)

~KaraQ

Aaaaws *sniffles* that is so sad. I just knew that Yuuri wouldn't leave Wolfram like that, but now things are going to be even harder. *sighs* I feel sorry for them both.

Thank you once again for sharing. I look forward to reading s'more soon I hope. The journey is half the fun.

I was going to see Eragon myself, but I heard some disparaging things from other fans of the book. I may just rent it when it comes out on DVD.

wow i hope that yuur and wolfram can get thing stange out . and yuur tell him that he do love him or he is going to lose him . can not wait for the next chapter and see what happen next to them all.

Wow! Angst, angst, and more angst! I hope they work it out. And that would be scary, being lost like that.

Hi! It's me again. Once again, I just loved this chapter. I literally cried for Wolfram for all the hell that he had to go through. It tore my heart to see him feel so lost and vulnerable, and ultimately defeated. I do hope he and Wolfram does get to work things out between them. It's bad for my sanity and tissue supply, all this animosity going on between them two gorgeous men. *Sigh* But it seems like more problems are in store for the two soon-to-be lovers (good god, I do hope not!).

Good work, yet again! I am so anxious to see how everything's gonna turn out from here. :)

I must admit I didn't know what to think when I first read the title, but it intrigued me. Seems like you're writing has inspired me to start doing so aswell. >> And, I really enjoyed this. I get the feeling that staying true to Wolfram's character is the easiest but that's just me...I like the way this is writen. ^^ And the plot line is good. I'm just waiting to see how it ends up with Wolfram and Yuuri, but I'm glad you didn't just spring with Yuri going 'omfg I love Wolfram!' a little drama's good, and guess that why I'm somewhat fond of kyota. But yes, I really wanna read the next chapter. :3 Doesn't matter when the smut gets here, I think I like the plot line too much right now.

Ive been reading longer than Web(Webtester01), so he made me feel guilty for not reviewing sooner. Now you have both of us waiting to read the next chapter ^.^ I got to read the last chapter before he did. He was out at the movies watching Eragon. Then I wait a whole day before reviewing *sighs*

I love it, thank you so much for sharing. I don't miss Greta at all she certainly isn't important to the plot. I love how you have treated the characters weather they are OOC or IC I can actually see this happening. A really nice plot makes the lemons much more enjoyable ^.~

The English language is confusing even for natives and spell check doesn't always help.

Thanks again, and I look forward to reading s'more soon I hope.

I forgot to mention I was expecting for Yuuri to get so mad he would shut Wolfram up with a kiss. I suppose that would be too easy.

Thanks again.

Excellent chapter, as always! I am very eager to see the next! Hmm... I could see Yuri getting really jealous and end up kissing Wolfram; almost surprised he didnt in this chapter. :P

Must have mooore!