rate_review Reviews

Please update!
<3
I'm really looking forward to whatever different you are going to add to the story.

Great story so far, I really like it! But I agree with some of the other reviewers on that it gets a little bit boring reading the story as it pretty much follows the storyline of the movie so far, maybe you could have that in mind when you write more chapters in the future!

Otherwhise I love the way you portray both Chihiro and Haku, and of course I love the fact that they are a bit older now, too, haha!
About the title, where's the meaning of it, anyways, as we have yet to read about a different beginning?!

Can't wait to read more and find out what's going to happen, and see if you plan to make some changes (personally I hope you'll). So please update soon...

Emma

Hey, this is a really good read. ^_^
I've really enjoyed it and found myself wishing that there were more chapters to read from. I really like how you designed the older chihiro, and your narrative style is entertaining and pretty engaging. I'll be definitely waiting around for more of your updates!

Oh I hope you update this, it's so hard to find Spirit away fanfiction

keep on going! It's rare to see good or lemony spirited away fanfiction

sry, but it seems like this story is better suited in fanfiction.net not ADULTfanfiction.net.

Okay, so I know it's been a long time since you put up a chapter, but could you please update ADB? I really like it so far, and after watching SA again today I really needed to read some fanfiction, and ADB was the most interesting. Okay, this is getting a bi too long now :P so I'll leave it on a positive note: update soon cause I love this fic!!

i really like where this story is going. how old are chihiro and haku by the way? i may have missed out that detail in the story. do continue your story. it would be a waste if you stopped writing this story. please update soon! XD

i like where this story is going. is this the first time chihiro is going to the spirit world? or is it a continuation of the real movie? it would be better if you did not keep continuing to base it completely on the original movie. maybe continue basing it on the movie for awhile before using your own storyline. making chihiro and haku both teenagers has given you an advantage. being teenagers, both of them would have desires and urges. which you could describe and create incidents between the both of them. please do not make haku a extremely old spirit which has an appearance of a teenager a few years older than chihiro like many spirited away fanfictions in ff.net, its just wierd and disturbing that a very old person is in love with a teenager. please update soon. ^^

Wow, really good story! Please update soon, its been a while i see, so i hope you will still continue this story, id really love it!!!

Hope to read more soon bye bye!