rate_review Reviews

OMG! your writing! awesome~! *dies* oh i <3 it!! please continue. :)

Hi! This is a nice start--are you going to keep going? It's fun to see different takes on the story. Thanks for posting!

I love your fic, the beginning is so sad and violent, hope you will update soon, in the novel it seems Riki take Iason according to Lena's site http://ainokusabi.atspace.com/ to an hotel so don't bother you about that point

I'm only on chapter 2 - and I will finish the story. But I have to bitch just a little...

The anime leaves a hugh amount of room for interpretation - Iason's motives, his relationships to Katze and Raoul, even to Riki. Wonderful, wonderful for fan-fic writers.

But - absolutely - Riki took Iason to his own apartment to offer his body. And he broke the window of the car. And Iason beat up the guys who attacked Riki. Iason was NOT kind to Riki after he took him. He 'tamed' him.

I love the part about Iason meeting Riki as a boy. But the parts of your story that flat out negate the anime I really dislike.

Sorry - just my not-so-humble opinion...

Hey, this seems interesting. both of them remember the incident but not that it involved the other! Great idea! hope u continue soon! looking forward to an update

oh more please

Interesting stat ... Looking forward to more ^^

Love the story, and you really did come up with a new perspective on the whole story. Makes me wonder what the following chapters will bring...

Good writing style and nice grast of storytelling.