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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great work u hav there.... but it's still moving too slow... i was hoping dat u'll make it longer.. hehe..
keep up d good work, i'm lookin forward to ur updates.. Ganbarimasu!!!
keep up d good work, i'm lookin forward to ur updates.. Ganbarimasu!!!
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, I LOVE your story ! It's great, and i love the plot and situation you have written for these two lovable characters.
Rock on ! And look forward to your next chapters .
Rock on ! And look forward to your next chapters .
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your forgiven. Your a really good writer and I'm sure you'd get millions of reviews if you only ask nicely because believe it or not there are many people out there who like to review.
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You seriously bitch too much. If you write good stories and ask 'nicely' for reviews, some people will be kind enough to do that and even give you insight and feedback. I hope you enjoy this review because this the last damn one you'll ever get from me and I hope from anyone else who feels the same way. You really need an attitude adjustment.
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Somehow I understand your need to ask for reviews, even if it was a bit over the edge.
But as it was already mentioned your story is GOOD and interesting and it´d be a shame if you stopped writing for the wrong reasons, I know how frustrating this lack of response can be and it´s really not fair, because nice and well written fics are hard to find and they do deserve feedback, your story deserves it. And I think now you understand that there are lots of people reading and enjoying your work, even if they´re too lazy to drop a review.
Don´t feel discouraged, you´re a very good author and sorry if I didn´t comment before, but again, demands are not the best motivator, actually they´re down right the opposite.
As for the review now XD...let me say that I LOVE this angst! I´m absolutely crazy about these kinds of situation! You´re doing good with Poor Fuji thinks Tezuka doesnt see him when actually poor Tezuka loves him and wants to worship him but he´s too shy to do something about it and only when desperate he decides to take action. Yeah this can easily be turned into a terrible cliche, but you´re handling it very well. Your characterization is believable and never boring.
I hope you get better and come back inspired to write more and more, I´ll be waiting anxiously ^__^
But as it was already mentioned your story is GOOD and interesting and it´d be a shame if you stopped writing for the wrong reasons, I know how frustrating this lack of response can be and it´s really not fair, because nice and well written fics are hard to find and they do deserve feedback, your story deserves it. And I think now you understand that there are lots of people reading and enjoying your work, even if they´re too lazy to drop a review.
Don´t feel discouraged, you´re a very good author and sorry if I didn´t comment before, but again, demands are not the best motivator, actually they´re down right the opposite.
As for the review now XD...let me say that I LOVE this angst! I´m absolutely crazy about these kinds of situation! You´re doing good with Poor Fuji thinks Tezuka doesnt see him when actually poor Tezuka loves him and wants to worship him but he´s too shy to do something about it and only when desperate he decides to take action. Yeah this can easily be turned into a terrible cliche, but you´re handling it very well. Your characterization is believable and never boring.
I hope you get better and come back inspired to write more and more, I´ll be waiting anxiously ^__^
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is not the way to get SERIOUS reviews. By doing this you only show your insecurity and make your readers go away. Which is a pity because you do have potential.
And since you wanted 24 reviews, you got it, now you HAVE to post the next chapter right now!!!
Does it feel good to get this 24 forced 'reviews' if you can call, OH GIVE ME MORE, reviews??
Grow up a little bit, and I bet you´ll get more attention by merit and not by childish threats.
And since you wanted 24 reviews, you got it, now you HAVE to post the next chapter right now!!!
Does it feel good to get this 24 forced 'reviews' if you can call, OH GIVE ME MORE, reviews??
Grow up a little bit, and I bet you´ll get more attention by merit and not by childish threats.
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, I think it is mean to withold a chapter just because you want reviews................
but I like your story so much that I will review. (It is great so far, keep up the great work!)
Now damn it, you better post chapter 7!!!!!!!!!!
but I like your story so much that I will review. (It is great so far, keep up the great work!)
Now damn it, you better post chapter 7!!!!!!!!!!
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Here's your fucking 24 reviews.
Needy much?
Pretty pathetic way to get attention. Your story is good and speaks for itself. It makes me wonder though, you sound like a kid, being so needy. I wonder if you are even old enough to be on here?
Needy much?
Pretty pathetic way to get attention. Your story is good and speaks for itself. It makes me wonder though, you sound like a kid, being so needy. I wonder if you are even old enough to be on here?
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story... it reminded me of my houseschool life, of secret admirers and such... the note and roses in the locker, that was just romantic...
pls update soon, i wanna know what other things will tezuka do to win fuji's heart...
pls update soon, i wanna know what other things will tezuka do to win fuji's heart...
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love da stoy....especially pairing but i cant help but feel sorry 4 fuji
update soon!
update soon!