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Wonderful and suspenseful story so, but you're HTML codes for the chapter are off - the readers can see them. I would like to read more if you're still working on this.

I love this fic! Will it ever be updated again?

…scary.
Like I said, I read some Viewfinder Fiction.
Few I can remember. And if I can remember I mostly don’t like it. (Yes, nice Viewfinder Fiction DO exist… but VERY few.)
But an adult.net were indeed beside ‘The Hunt’ more Viewfinder Fics I like remembering.
In fact it isn’t really surprising you wrote them, though I AM surprised. (But it’s definitely a pleasant surprise.)
‘Aftermath’ was my first Viewfinder Fic with a Plot. And ‘Wanting more’ I read twice just because I hoped maybe this time, Tabaka and Asami meet. (But it’s remain a cruel cliffhanger *grin*)
I LOVE how you do Tabaka… wait.
I’m not quite common writing in English but if I say it that way it sounds just so suggestive, right-///-?
What I wanted to say… well done. Very well done. And don’t stop being brilliant. The Viewfinder Fandom needs you!
…and I need to know, what happen, when Tabaka and Asami meet.
Just in case it doesn’t bother you^^
In my review for ‘The Hunt’ I said I never read about a snappy, clever Tabaka… please let me rewording.
I never read about a Tabaka who stands against Asami.
So please let me see how he resists Asami when he meets him in ‘Aftermath’ and ‘Wanting more’.

By the way… I don’t like FeiLong. Really DON’T like him.
…but when you write him? Then it’s okay with me^^ (Probably because you offer me such a wonderful Tabaka.)
I don’t said that, to complain about what you write.
Just to show you, that how you write make me stop complaining about thing I normally don’t like.
…I hope it’s at least somehow clear what I try to tell, even if it reads itself like I’m ten *laugh*
Now I will not longer torture you with my English and hope very truly I didn’t offended you with my trying to make compliments for your wonderful and intelligent writing.

Thankyou for audience.

What a fantastic story! I can't wait to see where you go as you've woven a complex theme and now that you've set the stage it'll be interesting to see where it goes! I hope you update soon :) is this posted anywhere that gives update alerts?

I remember starting this but getting distracted. I'm glad I came back, I can't wait for the next chapter.

i adore your stories! everything seems very believable and your writing has a wonderful flow to it, along with your characterizations and character interactions. i feel extremely bad now for takaba, haha. i hope that he can figure out a way to play about asami and fei, and this "mysterious woman" without pissing asami and fei off too much. because once they (read: asami and fei) find out (which i'm assuming they eventually must for the plot to thicken! ;D) all hell will be breaking loose, eh? poor, poor takaba. :DDD

Oh wow! I really like this story and the plot-line is very intriguing. Poor Akihito! What does that woman want from him? Write more soon!

Waouuu ! A viewfinder fanfic ! It's beautiful and rare ! More please...

This is an excellent start! You've done a good job so far in keeping Takaba IC (he has been angsty lately, poor guy), and you've created a very intriguing first chapter.

I also like Takaba's mother very much, and enjoyed the comments about the perspective buyers of her painting XD!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

SiN