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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If you need some ideas, I thought of one for you.
Introduce Brock or Nurse Joy, and do a threesome.
For keeping the fic linear, i'd use nurse joy, but i'm just throwing ideas out there.
Introduce Brock or Nurse Joy, and do a threesome.
For keeping the fic linear, i'd use nurse joy, but i'm just throwing ideas out there.
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, awesome.
This chapter was just as good as the first, even though I find Ash's mom hotter.
I'll be looking forward to lots more!
This chapter was just as good as the first, even though I find Ash's mom hotter.
I'll be looking forward to lots more!
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think you really have writing potential. please continue this story i cant wait to read the next one.
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue. you can have ash do gym leaders or any other girl he meets along the way. hell let misty or may get some action to please!
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keep it goin'. It's good.
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very very good. please make another one soon!!
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's different...but verry enjoyable.
Besides this is adult fanfiction after all.
Great job
Besides this is adult fanfiction after all.
Great job
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You must continue.
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
genius dude. your work is good.