rate_review Reviews

You know, it's funny how--I'm pretty sure--this is the only fanfic for this pairing that exists. In fact, no body seems to even acknowledge that this paring is a possibility, despite the fact that, within the first few hours of meeting Shannon, Senes says to him, "I want you. I want to make you mine." I mean, come on! Their interaction is ripe for stories like the one you've written here.

Anyway, my rantings not withstanding, this is a great story. I think you capture Senes's angst over being a woman that must look out for herself well, and I like that at the end she doesn't totally become all soft and tame, but still has a bit of a fire to her. Shannon is perhaps a little OOC, if only because he's not constantly thinking about Pacifica's safety, or Cz, or Simm, or whatever, (like he always seems to be in the show). But when I squint, it goes away (which is fine with me--I always found that part of him annoying anyway). And, what is best, it doesn't have the weird incest vibes that Shannon/Pacifica shipping stories are bound to give off. Great work, thanks for writing this, kudos!

This review is for this story, and not for the other (my mistake, sorry) :

What a pity ! NOBODY did a review on this story !!! That's sinful ! I don't know these characters, but I find the chapter very good, as always with you. Be sure of this !
I hope you'll find another very good plot to write, because after reading and reading again "Across the ages" and "Chronicles of the West", I KNOW that you are a very good author !!!
Sure I love Inuyasha's characters, but I'll read your other stories.

Thank you for your writing,

Your faithful french reader,
A bientôt,

Merely Truth