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by artemisgirl

schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I loved that. Absolutely hilarious and quite original. I can actually picture that conversation having taken place in the manga - you know how they sometimes do those goofy epilogues to some volumes? That's exactly what this story reminded me of ^^
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
person animekid
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahahah too funny; L is sometimes sick in the head! XD

really love how you put both of the character in such a situation! Really made my day and well done
person maudite
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HA! I can totally see L pulling something like this! And you wrote it well, too... Excellent story.
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O......M.......G

THAT WAS PERFECT!!! not only did it amuze me, it caught my interest cuz i'm trans XD (gay guy trapped in a girls body) i didn't know if i could see L as a girl >.> ..... actually that worked too XD then i didn't have to worry cuz he was still a guy but it still worked XD WOW XD holy crap that was magical XD and O_O i can't...... beleive...... you kept the characters so true in the fic O_O .... mazing.... ok i'm done rambling XD loved it luv :3
person ShadowGM
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yup, that was very OOC and very random... but very cute too! ^_^ I loved it! do you plan to do a sequel? It would be interesting ^^ L-kun is so playful *snicker* poor Raito-kun is all confused ^^ but at least he found the perfect 'girlfriend'
person Gawain
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
xD Well, shoot. L's tricky and no mistake. xD Have you ever read the book What Happened to Lani Garver? ^^ Lani plays with people's minds in exactly that way.

"It wouldn't be socially acceptable" xD Geez, Raito. And killing people is? Or is this set during the part he doesn't remember all that?
person You Know Who!
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL! You always come up with the most interesting situations. This one.. was damn quite interesting! :D I needed to keep myself sane since you know.. not being sleepy at almost 6 in the morning is kind of odd @@ But yeah, more crack stories and interesting situations are always good coming from you!
person Aureawolf
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. ^_^ I loved it. I like that its full of dialogue, considering how thats really all there is in the actual series. L and Raito were very well characterized, the antagonizing was perfect. ^_^ Rock on!
person rara
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww :P

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