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If I ask reaaaaally nicely.... Will you post the final part?

Then I shall make you smile!
Loving the story, dearest.
I can barely contain my excitement in waiting for the last installment.

Omg i love this story! "Sorry about that i just took him off his catnip" Lmao >_< it's genius.

Chapter 1 is pretty good. It would be known as 'lime' by the way. Rikuo's being pretty magnanimous, but he's thinking of the future and wants sex to leave a good taste in Kudo's mouth, so to speak.

Chapter 2 has its moments and I always like a good shower scene. I really enjoy the emotion of Rikuo touching Kudo while he's masturbating instead of just watching him. It makes the act more intimate.

Chapter 3 - Hmm, well the flashback explained what Kudo was doing wearing a dress this time, but nothing in the situation really advanced the plot (this being PWP, the plot would be the relationship). The scene before the flash back with the two scuffling in the store was cute and seems like something they'd do and what happened after with Kakei was very in character for him. Kudo does have trouble expressing what he needs, so points for Rikuo for realizing that and turning it into a bit of eroticism. I'm looking forward to the lemon and would like to see a focus on the sensations involved while making love (especially touch and taste) and the connection they each feel for the other.

ooooh, plz hurry and add the last chapter it is a good story and i love yaoi, plz, plz, plz,plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVED IT!!! make the next chapter fast,please?! i will die if i cant find out how nervious and silly it will be <3`

I love this story! Poor tormented Kazahaya. Hope you add the next chapter soon!

*content sigh* been a long time since I read a good Legal Drug fic.
You don't know how happy it made me to see the little "update" sign XD keep writing, and don't worry, it takes a real talent to ruin a sex chappie -_-;;

will this be your first lemon? huh, i didn't realize that. but i'm so surprised to find that you write legal drug! and this one is good. i must say, that shower part was hawt. it actually made me want to stop everything i'm doing and write a naughty pwp. then that led to an ever greater/funnier idea that i'm going to play around with at a later time.

but i digress. this is awesome. i can't wait for the next part. update soon!

I discovered your story on fanfiction.net and then i came here and saw that the fun was still going and i'm glad. i look forward to the rest of this tantilizing fanfic.