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Hey, this was pretty good. I don't know how I didn't find it earlier, being an interesting pair and all. Wished I could read more of it... maybe I should just leave AFF and start looking around LJ?

Excellent work. I really like the way you write this pairing. It's just so well done and you do such an amazing job of portraying both Franky and Iceburg. The dialogue is also lively and both Iceburg and Franky are constantly kept in character. I just like your style of writing and the story you tell. It's fun and possesses a unique, distinct flavor that keeps me interested in the plot. I also enjoy the idea of Franky tempting and seducing Iceburg. Very hot indeed. And I love the improvisation with the olive oil from Iceburg's salad. In fact, the part where Iceburg protests about the oil being to expensive is one of my favorite parts. I also really liked the lines where Iceburg slammed Franky into the hull of the ship and ground his shoulders into the strakes yards above the ground. That roughness between them is actually damn sexy. Anyway, hope to see more Iceburg x Franky fics from you in the future. I'm quite partial to that pairing.