rate_review Reviews

Amazing! Again! Tetsu and Chris and all the tension, adored it.

hi!!
I was wondering if you're considering finnishing the fic?
i really like it and you haven't update in a while so...??

best regards!!

hello!

i really enjoyed your story and i was wondering if you could uptade or finish this story, cause its really cool.

thank you and i hope that you update!

This is a very good start. It flows well from one scene to another. Very good. However I would work on your grammer and syntax a bit more. In a number of places the way you phrase yourself is very difficult to understand. And use contractions like doesn't and won't. That will make it easier to read.

It's not really any of my business, but would I be correct in saying that English is not your first language?

*reads chapter 2* ... *blinks* Okay that answers my language question. German huh? Cool. German is one of the easiest languages in the world to learn. My grandmother and mother speak it fluently. I was taking classes in high school but they unfortunetly canceled the class halfway through my second year.

When compared the two languages are phrased completely opposite each other, so the way you write makes sense to me, since I know some German. I just need to transpose and re-arrange the wording. Easy.

Say, how about an exchange? I could help you with your written English and you could teach me some everyday German? Please? *Gives Puppy-dog eyes complete with crocodile tears*

Amy

You updated the story. Yay!!! I'm so glad that you did. I was anxious for an update. I love this story. There just is not enough stories with Chris and Tetsu. I have always liked this pairing.

So now that you are about to finish this story... maybe you will update your other ones. Yes... pretty please with sugar on top?

*winces* That explains why Josie ran away didn't contact anyone form her family! Does Leon know that his cousin was attacked and possibly raped? He has a right to know someone hurt Josie! Even if she didn't believe Chris when he told them about the animals being human, she was nice about it...And she said she loves Chris like a brother, I doubt that would stop, despite they having different views of life...I noticed she didn't say anything when Sam said she saw them too. I would suggest that Chris tell Tetsu and Leon about Josie's attack, and let the Ds handle it...

wow this story is awsome please do continue it. u were right about the sleeping scene it was precious

OMG OMG OMG YOU UPDATED *hugs*
I is so happy, I was waiting so
long for your update, but it was
worth it, spledid work. can't
wait untill the next one

*grins* I have already reviewed this over at Fanfiction.net. But I decided to read this to see if there's any parts i missed. Loving this so far! But i have to make this short, since my dad wants the computer when he returns from doing his errands. I dropped some comments over at your lj. I'm using this sn, because Shinigami is sadly taken.