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Hmm...Kaidou's eyesight must be pretty good to recognize it as a baby, considering he was only two months along.

update soon. That cliffhanger was evil.

I have to say. Your story is ... amusing. Though it did seem incredibly rushed. With a story like this, it would be best to do a little research. It's not all that hard to look up the parts to an ultrasound machine. Though in real hospitals, cat-scans and x-rays would probably have been done before he woke. But seeing as how that could damage the unborn fetus, I can see why you chose the ultrasound.

As for the fetus. Do you have any idea how small it is at only two months gestation? About one inch/the size of a kidney bean. Kaidoh and Inui would not know what the hell they were seeing in the ultrasound because the fetus would be barely visable and the image super grainy. If anything, thinking Kaidoh had a tumor would be more believable.

Don't get me wrong. I love MPreg stories. But only when they're well written. I'm sure with time and a little attention to detail, your story will turn out okay.

lol. Inui fainted. Very nice. Can't wait for the next update. ^^ . Would Inui be doing a lot of calculations over this, being t he data collector he is. *grins*

*raises hand* Question! Are you planning to update this awesome story anytime soon? I'm about to lose it here! I NEED to know what's going to happen next!

Hey! I've never read a prince of tennis fic before. Yours is the first and to be honest with you....I LOVE IT!!! Oh please write more!!PLEASE!!

Ok at the beginning I was drooling over the keyboard with a massive nose bleed. And then I was rolling over the floor laughing!! I can't believe you make Kaworu get pregnant and Inui fall over when he realizes it!! I bet he won't be making any special juices for a while lol!

Yay I made the first review!