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I love this! it's an interesting plot to use and the fact that Yuuri and Wolfram aren't lovers or fiances already is just too good not to play with. They're rivals but the chemisty is still as hot as ever. You must continue this though may I suggest some over-done cliches? Like Conrart liking Yuuri or even Murata? How about Gwendal or Gunter? Anyone of them will do and the reaction from Wolfram against anyone marking his territory...

Wolves are possessive creatures, as everyone is well-aware and also highly jealous of what they consider theirs... In any sense of the word. May I also suggest that Wolfram be sume? I never understood why Yuuri is despite the original manga costume. Yuuri was always more plaible and submissive in his actions than Wolfram.

Anyway, please continue!

Much inspiration and fast typing,

Akoya

Yay an atypical kkm story, I can't wait to read it.

Hehe, this is cool. You've definitely got their characters down pat and the concept for the story is really interesting. The title of the story caught my attention because it reminded me of the 'Red Queen' hypothesis from my Physical Anth class and I was wondering if you're somehow going to work that in (though I don't see how as it has to do with evolution) or if you're referencing some other aspect of the Red Queen's personality. I'm going to bookmark this story, you've got a great start.

Ooh, more please. I love the idea of this and the setting of the pair of them already enemys is such a fun one to watch develop. Gwendel is his typical self...just yay. I always enjoy a good AU

good start; great to see Yuuri and Wolfram as rivals,yet equals.

I love it. A totally new idea and a great first chapter. Keep it up!