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omg i love this story!

Very nice job! I really enjoyed it. Now I just need the alternate ending! Need, not want, need.

This is one of the only stories I've ever bothered to review, and I've been through a lot of them. That was easily the best fanfic I've read in pretty much all aspects. The grammar, storyline, flow, and creativity in your writing actually brought tears to my eyes. For the love of all deities, write more stories for this fandom.

Chapter 31:

I originally came to this because it had 31 chapters, and I'm a sucker for long fics. After the first chapter, I was expecting a drunken gang bang, poorly written and only exciting in that clicking 'back' would be a happier option than continuing.

I. Was. Wrong.

I was *totally* sucked in. I fell in love. Your characterisations, your writing style, the ideas of the wishes, it was by turns exciting and thought provoking (in more ways than one ^_~)

Your twister description, and later, the mother at the fashion show (the twins are my favourites. I was sad to see them lose, but the end made up for it) - they *totally* inspired a new real life fantasy, and a fanfic of my own. (Speaking of which, it takes place on a hiking trip, and oddly enough, the captcha for this review is 'Etraes mountain')

I laughed. I *cried.* I absolutely fell one hundred percent in love with your writing, and as soon as I finish writing this (long-winded) review, I'm going straight back to your author page to see if there's anything else you've written (hopefully twincentric, but I won't hesitate if its not.)

I came for the length. I expected crap. I got (to follow the theme) a diamond in the rough. Well done, absolutely, and also: thank you for taking the time to write this, and post it where it can be read.

I am enjoying this story very much so far. It flows nicely and the behaviors of the characters feels right, so far. Nice!

....WOW. Just WOW. #1. Best. Ouran. Fic. On this website.

I so can't wait for the alternate ending to be posted! I think this is the best story I've read on this site so far. :D Awesome read.

Okay, this is, hands down, one of the BEST fan fictions I've read, ever! EVER! I can be really picky about finding something I enjoy, which means I seldom find that specific piece of literary gold, but God in Heaven, I hit the jackpot! I wish I hadn't plowed through the story so quickly, but oh! I just couldn't slow down! Your writing style is wonderful, the story was never boring or forced for a moment. You kept so true to the characters, you were so mindful of their mindset and the atmosphere, it made the story that much more believable. I can tell you put so much thought into every nook and cranny of the story, and the fact that you didn't forget the minor details from earlier chapters really impressed me. I know that's easier for readers to do, but I've known some writers *cough*me*cough* who have made the same mistake. This was just such a wonderful piece of fiction. I'm only sad that I didn't stumble upon it sooner. You're wonderful! I'm certainly going to eye your page and see what other brilliance you've written.

I hope life is going well for you, and that there isn't too much for you to stress over. Thank you for sharing this with us silly readers; this story really has lifted my mood. I hope to one day write something as good.

Sincerely,

Zellezra

Ok, just read chapter 4 (or 4.3, really not sure. XD), and I was wondering...what is the name of the movie they were watching? I don't even know if it's really or not, but it was called an "American classic", so I was wondering.

Great fic! I'm only this far, but I have much more yet to read. I'm actually happy I just now started it. That way, I don't have to wait with bated breath for the next chapter. Mua ha ha! Very good work. I can't wait to see more HaruhiXKyouya. :D

THis story is fantastic.

That was so sweet! And very much in character for both of them. I loved it so much. But now...after all that delicious teasing you did...I really can't wait for the naughty ending! Update soon! =)