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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this story is AWESOME!!! I thought I reviewed it last week when I read it, I musta gotten bumped offline.
Not only are all the characters believably written, the way you write it makes the steps seem logical and as if this sort of thing would not be too far of a stretch to actually happen. In addition to that the flow of the story is awesome, dialogues are fun, and the lack of major mistakes makes this a pleasure to read. All in all I give this story a 10, definately the best OHC story I've read.
I hope you plan to continue this story, I've checked back twice for updates, but notice that you posted everything within a month's time and haven't updated in over a month. I beg of you, read some other fanfiction, bounce with some cronies, whatever you need for inspiration. I really don't want to see this great fanfic dropped.
Your new fan,
Tsukashi
Not only are all the characters believably written, the way you write it makes the steps seem logical and as if this sort of thing would not be too far of a stretch to actually happen. In addition to that the flow of the story is awesome, dialogues are fun, and the lack of major mistakes makes this a pleasure to read. All in all I give this story a 10, definately the best OHC story I've read.
I hope you plan to continue this story, I've checked back twice for updates, but notice that you posted everything within a month's time and haven't updated in over a month. I beg of you, read some other fanfiction, bounce with some cronies, whatever you need for inspiration. I really don't want to see this great fanfic dropped.
Your new fan,
Tsukashi
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS FIC!!! I can't wait to read more! please update!!!
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...UPDATE, your writing is amazing!
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
enthralling fic! would love to read more, so are you going to finish it? or is it posted somewhere else?
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Please, please continue!
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow, I ADORE this story! It's an incredible, insightful read and I can't wait for the second round!
peace,
raven
peace,
raven
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww! a very cute story!
I'm looking forward to more
I'm looking forward to more
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I meant to review this ages ago - somebody pimped it on a LiveJournal community, and I instantly loved it. I am a great believer in the whole everybody/Haruhi notion, and to see it finally being developed as a story is just great. All of the first wishes have been fantastic to read - a tantalising glimpse of what's to come.
Not to mention the fact that this story is amazingly well written. And I'm not saying that because I want you to write more (although, obviously, I do) - I genuinely mean it. It's very difficult to find good quality Ouran fic these days. Usually you have to wade through a quagmire of Mary-Sues first. Not only is your story well thought out and well written, but the characters are just as I would expect to find them in the real manga (ahh, if only Bisco would see this story and use it as canon). I thought that in particular, you dealt with Haruhi's changing feelings very well. She showed the right kind of mix of confusion and intrigue, and it was great to read.
I can't wait to see how this continues. It's just a shame that FF.Net won't allow NC-17 rated stories, because I think you would get a lot more reviews if you published it there. Have you considered posting it to the LJ communities? They would love it, and again, it would get a lot more exposure, and therefore the reviews that it rightly deserves.
Anyway, please keep going with this amazing story - looking forward to seeing what happens next, and maybe reading some NC-17 action soon! Well done on some brilliant writing.
Not to mention the fact that this story is amazingly well written. And I'm not saying that because I want you to write more (although, obviously, I do) - I genuinely mean it. It's very difficult to find good quality Ouran fic these days. Usually you have to wade through a quagmire of Mary-Sues first. Not only is your story well thought out and well written, but the characters are just as I would expect to find them in the real manga (ahh, if only Bisco would see this story and use it as canon). I thought that in particular, you dealt with Haruhi's changing feelings very well. She showed the right kind of mix of confusion and intrigue, and it was great to read.
I can't wait to see how this continues. It's just a shame that FF.Net won't allow NC-17 rated stories, because I think you would get a lot more reviews if you published it there. Have you considered posting it to the LJ communities? They would love it, and again, it would get a lot more exposure, and therefore the reviews that it rightly deserves.
Anyway, please keep going with this amazing story - looking forward to seeing what happens next, and maybe reading some NC-17 action soon! Well done on some brilliant writing.
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
next chapter, next chapter!!!
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon.