rate_review Reviews

I was kinda hoping you would go hantai on us, but this was cute too

So far, this has been a wonderful story! I wish that I would have run across this on one of the more popular sites (fanfiction. for example), and it was basically a wild hair that brought me to this site. I wonder, if, just for the fun of it, Haruhi decides to have a little fun after finals are over and to treat the boys, do that last round of wishes. They'd know that it'd be nothing beyond friendship, but it would be a nice treat for the beginning of summer break. Especially for Mori and Huni, since this was their last year and it's very likely that they'd see less of each other. Keep up the good work, dark

You have created a beautiful world here! But I can't help but wonder what everyone else is going through! Mori and Huni and the twins! They must feel some kind of heartbreak, even if they are happy for Kyoya. Please post the next chapter soon. This is a really great piece and I'd hate to see it go unfinished.

MORE PLEASE. :3

Oh man, found this after searching for Kyoya and Haruhi stories, and it made my Monday! The characters are so very well written, though Haruhi seems a bit off at moments (which was explained admirably and understandably, I just felt it needed a mention). I'm a big fan of your psychological take on many of the characters, and I'm looking forward to the conclusion of this.

Also... I do hope an alternate version comes out with the fulfilled wishes. As plot goes, this is amazing, but the squee-ful fangirl in me wants the see this carried out!

I love this story please finish it well.

This is very good! Keep it up!

I must say.. bravo on a wonderful storyline!!! I am glad to have found this gem while in the works.

Random side comment with regards to chapter "29": hahaha, the waffles have a hint of 'malt' in them. If I remember correctly, another of your stories involves the intrepid duo (Haruhi x Kyoya) and the malt flavor. Only, it wasn't a waffle...

Side comment 2 with regards to chapter "8": Look around; I'm sure you'll find someone in your area down for platonic massage swaps. (I do them all the time with my friends... but that's a crazy New Yorker for you.)

Finally- once again, wonderful wonderful job. I love this pairing, but... a super secret part of me sorta wants to know if you can come up with an extended alternate ending, in which each of the Ouran club guys DO get their 3rd wishes granted. I'm not sure what would happen with regards to plot afterwards, but.. mmm, Twincest + Haruhi = pure awesomeness.... not to mention the rest of the guys. (I dated a martial artist.. man, do they rock in bed, so Huni/Mori would be fun as hell to read...)

Ciao!! (and sorry for the longggg review!!)

Hi,
So I was reading a Host Club story on FF.net and I suddenly remembered reading this story a few years back, and agonizing between updates because this story is just THAT good. You build the sexual tension between the characters so well. To remember a story from a few years ago in as much detail as I remembered this one - is there any higher praise? So, I hunted the story down & spent the past 6 1/2 or so hours reading it. What a great way to spend a Sunday. The only disappointment I felt was when there were no more chapters to read. Please update soon.

This is a fantastic story! I really hope you decide to continue with it since I kind of freaked when there was no more after that last chapter...

Your characterization is good and I really enjoy the way you really delve into each character and give them the depth they deserve. Please update soon.