rate_review Reviews

Hmm. It needs a review. I should really review your pandora hearts work since I don't know this series here, but this story is well written either way

Too much sex? Never! Well, okay, but you do break up the action with plot, which I dearly love!

I just have to say that it's always a joy coming back to read this story, which sounds a little strange considering the dark contents. All the usual words of praise for the writing style, spelling and punctuation etc no mistakes whatsoever and all characters remain in character, which must be really difficult so kudos! And kelos too, if you want it.
Can't wait til you next update ^^ It's just nice to be able to read something a bit harsher every now and then, not saying that i don't enjoy the fluffy ones too, well as fluffy as you can get with this pairing..anyway - rambling! Sorry!
It was awesome and well-done so far!

Hmn, I wonder how they'll break the spell....XD. Zel obviously didn't pay close enough attention to that story. I'm curious to see how you'll develop Xellos' feelings for Zel in this fic. If you're updating this, does that mean there might be an update for Birth Rite? *puppy dog eyes*

Wow. I must have been lost in a haze of stupid when chapter 5 was added, because I totally missed it.

I almost--ALMOST--feel sorry for Xellos, but he really did bring it upon himself. I'm far more inclined to feel sorry for Zelgadis, who was driven to the point of insanity by our favorite Mazoku!

awww it's such a great story ; ; your not gonna finish it are you? ; ; please doooo ; ; ; ;

I love it one hundred percent. I love the idea of a mean asshole Xellos being forced to submit to Zelgadis. It's exactly what he needs. ^^
I hope you update this as soon as you can. *goes to read it again*

Awww...
No update for over a year. Will this story continue? I hope so. It's not just damn hot but you make me beleive this could actually happen. I suffer and feel with Zel. I also loved "Poison" to no end and saved it on my harddisc some time ago. Now I found you again, wondering where I know your nickname from. This one is also great and hope for you to continue it sometime. <3

Wow brilliant idea, I love the pairing and you can hardly get enough of this one.
I like the predicament Xelloss is in as he always seems to be seme in the other stories i've read.
Its a nice turn about.
I hope you continue it as its a great plot and very hot.
Pretty please... i cant wait for the rest!!!!!!!

AGH! You MUST continue this! If you don't, I'll stalk you and force you too! >=[

...j/k, I wouldn't do anything that creepy. But please, PLEASE, write more! It's so undeniable hot, we need to see how Zel uses his new found power!