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by nolanash

person GravitationInnocence
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mmmm!!!! I wish I could see what happens next! I love stories where shu does stuff like that for yuki, like, the little "shoW" there needs to be more of those, lol
person Crim
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was great!!! I love the way you write i hope to see more from you!
person Mizuki
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mizuki: YAY! I am the first to READ, REVIEW, and PRAISE you! Score! I love this story, really, I do. It flowed really well, and... and...

Kuma: You're an idiot. You can't even form a sentance.

Mizuki: I so can! See, I just did! And there, there's another one! And another! And anoth...

Kuma: I get it, I get it! Sheesh. I think I'll finish what the Dwarf was trying to say in the first place.

Mizuki: You're smaller than I am Rabbit!

Kuma: Anyway, this story was composed and typed out beauifully and not once in the entire time of reading it did I actually think of it as anything but an amazing piece of work.

Mizuki: He just liked the sex. Ahahahahahaha!

Kuma: Shut up! Damn French people... Back on topic, um...

Mizuki: :P Can't think of anything now, can you! *laughs evily* I'm having Rabbit stew tonight!

Kuma: You're a vegetarian so that was a waste... Well, keep up the good work and I really look foreward to more of your wor...

Mizuki: You suck on carrots!

Kuma: No, I chew on carrots.

Mizuki: No wonder your boyfriends so moody! You chew on his carrot and don't suck!

Kuma: Damn Dwarf! Don't screw with my words! *takes out an axe* Come 'ere!

Mizuki: Uh, great job on the story! See ya! *runs*

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