rate_review Reviews

You are so awesome. Thank you for such a well-written, thoughtful story. It was concise, emotional, with an element of ambiguity throughout the story. It also doesn't hurt that you have nice spelling and grammar skills too. XD Good job!

aww! that was sad and sweet too

Absolutely AMAZING! It was so beautiful...so descriptive...so deep! -stares in awe and dies, only to come back to life and stare in awe, again- :-P

Wow, that was beautiful...I loved it. Every aspect of Mugen's portrayal was just as tempestuous and unstable as he is, and for that I love you - and his interactions with Fuu were just perfect. I can't believe I never saw this before - GORGEOUS!

Love it. Love it. Love it.

Very very nice! i sure would've loved to have seen this continued, thought! ;)

whoa..this fic is so gritty....and vulgar due to mugen's language....but at the same time, it had a real plot and it really explained mugen's mentality.

i love it!

mugen really IS one scary guy though ne?

now on with the lemon? ^_^ pretty please?

You really ended this story differently than I expected, and I love it. I really like how you are showing Mugen's character.

Wow! That was amazingly well done. I love the whole Mugen/Fuu pairing, and the ending was surprising and sweet. Great job! Was this a one-shot or the first of a multi-chapter fic? I think it's great as a one shot, personally. Wow, I can't really say enough about it. The title is what caught my eye. I was like...hm...interesting! The characterization was very good too. All in all a very enjoyable read that had me enthralled the whole way through. Keep up the good work, and I hope you keep writing stuff. You're style is very easy to read and flows quite nicely. You actually had excellent grammar and little if no typos/spelling errors, and that's a rare find indeed, even in my own stuff. Great job and keep up the writing. I'd like to read more stuff by you!

~Butterflysuki

Is that all??? 'cause I definitely think there should be more!! It was SO good and very descriptive - i loved every second of it and didn't find myself constantly checking the bar on the side to see how much more there was to go, like I do with a lot of fics! Great job! ;0)