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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well i like it so far. it's good to see a serious side to Serena rather than the ditz she is in the anime. I'm glad you changed to speech marks for their talking. The stuff in chapter two was a tad confusing. Aside from a couple of spelling mistakes it's good! Can't wait for more!
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good evening:
Your story is off to a good start. If you like, please fix the grammar errors.
Darien as a kitty. How cute.
Your story is off to a good start. If you like, please fix the grammar errors.
Darien as a kitty. How cute.
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please, oh please update soon, i wanna know what happens
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice story, so far. i like it.
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ikuko and Kenji are dead?!?!?!?! I take it this is an AU, then... This is definitely gonna get intersitng from here... Wait...where is Serena getting money from? And actually, there's an episode of SuperS where Darien spends,like, a week at Rei's temple, and there was no trouble giving him a spare room then, so there shouldn't be any in giving Serena(and possibly Sammy, as well)a spare room semi-indefinately. Just a thought. Laters.
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Luniya?? Luna, right? That sneaky little cat, hehheh... The next chapter should be fun. Laters.