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O.o I just started reading this on a whim, but it's very interesting! I wouldn't normally read something like this at all, but I'm definitely enjoying it. I wonder if Yuki's gonna go storming down to the school now. *grins* Not only did his brother just show up, but someone held a gun to his son's head and the man who abused his Shuichi is now messing with Ryuichi... Then there's Koichi fucking with Tohma's son, and all... Heheheh. Nice choices with the families and characters and all. ^.^

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good story update soon, sorry i have reviewers block

Hey! Remember me from the normal fanfiction? Ya, well, I noticed your fic on here! Decided to reeiw, lol, since I love it so much! BTW, when r u planning on updating...? O_O lol

0.0 At first when I saw your fic as I was browsing, I told myself I wasn't in the mood for a 13 chapter fic, but after about an hour of watching really stupid crime shows on TV I decided a 13 chapter fic wasn't such a bad idea. I have only one thing to say....WHEN'S THE NEXT CHAPTER COMMING OUT?!?!?!

I love your charaters, and the senaro too! Durring the time Kessuke's attaker wasn't being named I figured one of three people, Ryuichi himself (Which I am SOOOO relived that it wasn't), Tatsuha(I was hoping it wouldn't be), or Taki (Since he's Gravitation's residant ass/rapest...well other than Kitazawa)

Makes me feel even more dirty since I joined a gravition group for a convention I'm going to and since all the main charaters were taken, I somehow ended up being Taki, I even just got my hair cut and dyed to look like his. How'd I end up cosplaying the rapest? Bah! Anyhoos! I am super duper looking forward to your next chapter!!! Keep up the good work!

wow i was scare there. but i was happy when uncle tatus come . will i hope the next chapter is good as this one was kep up the good work and i will be waiting for the next chapter of the story and see how thing go .

wow good story and love it can not wait for more of the story please up date soon love the kids .

Hey..This story is good..I love the plotline..except it seems like it's going too fast..but it's still good!

TAKI!!?!??!?@% I had assumed it to be Tatsuha (doesn't seem like a kid-loving guy) So I bow to you for being able to surprise me like that! *bows* Although wouldn't Shuichi know about Taki and wouldn't he have said something to Ryuichi.... WAAAAAH, please update soon!

I read all seven chappy. I love this story so far. Your origanls are so well created.Thier not gary sue. thanks the tacos in taco bell. I think a onesided toya and Shichi should happen. Toya would hurt Kessuke emoitonally for taking his dad love. hurry up with the next chapter.PLZ

I hVW TO KNOW WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN PLEASE UPDATE!