rate_review Reviews

This is turning out wonderfully!! I wish you'd finish it and I also want to say I'm a huge fan of your published work. Lol sorry for gushing!! Please finish this!

Damn this is a great story. And that scene with Omi and Ken in chapter 2 is awesome. I've still got a few chapters to read tonight before I go to bed though. And it's 4:00am now. :)

please update i cant wait for more

How refreshing! To see Omi be the more (comparatively) experienced of the two... Ken was more than willing to take the lead, but cared enough about Omi to defer to his guidance. I like this idea of having them split at the first sign of danger. Gives each couple the privacy to work on other things just as important as, though secondary to, survival. And hopefully increases the odds of them surviving. I'm already addicted to seeing how this plays out.

lol. ^_^
i love it when the "clean" shower sex comes before the "dirty" bed sex. XD
they'll have to get back in the shower when they wake up! ^_^

JET!!! Sorry for falling so far behind with reading and reviewing! RL is being wonky again! I'm glad that you're still working on this story and I'm really enjoying it so far! An WOOHOO for Yohji being able "overcome objections" with Aya!!! I'm thoroughly enamored of the smut, but I am looking forward to knowing what's going on with the kitten-nappers. Who are they? What do they want (besides our boys!)? I'm looking forward to the next update!! ~Blythe

i love this story sooo much! the way u worked up to it in the first story was wonderful -funny & sweet & seductive & HOT!
& now it's getting angsty & i just about can't stand it! XD

post more soon!

OMG. MORE!!! Please? Pretty please?!

Delicious, action, suspense, hot sex and wonderful characterizations. I hope for more soon -- I'm anxious for clues as to who is trying to capture the kittens.

I am completely enthralled with your tight, compact storytelling. The economy of words yet still evoking vivid images and a full range of emotions. *tell me dear... do I look good in this shade of green?* I do have a question though... from Chap 1 to 4 there is quite the obvious time shift... do we ever get to see the 'first time' between Aya and Yohji? After the sweet build up in Chap 1, I kinda REALLY want it... Wow. That sounded like begging. In this context, I'm guessing that's a good thing. And I just don't do Ken x Omi but you made it soooo bareable! Just ask Sarge.. that's glowing praise! Thanks for the enjoyable read!