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for Twisting Fate

by MoonsBlood

person Kasey
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG no way.
I cant believe it!? When I read the word "Neo" I fell right off my seat...and only to that to find what? THERE'S NO NEXT CHAPTER?! Seriously I strangled my fingers, while I sat reading these last chatpers, with the strings of my pj shorts, which I so expertly rip out of the seam. Thanks to this excelent story...GOD I feel so inspired to finish my own...I wish you could finish this...I really do. It's a great story so far...the sequel and the first. I cant wait!!!!!!!!!!!
o(*O*)o <-- My first reaction...
person Crmy
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i've read both FATE stories and have to say, WOW, thats pretty deep but really good, and it sounds to me like Shu-errNeo-err umm that person, is devolping mulitple personalites.
Anywho, update soon
Cheers
Crmy
person mystice
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! what's going on with Shu??? So he's turned into the bad ass Neo, he's having split personalities..? But Neo relented in No Escaping Fate, ryt? he relented that he still loved Eiri despite everything..? Okay pls update whenever you can coz i wanna know where u plan to go with your plot...
person KakashiSanzo5790
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg!
once again....im totally OBSESSED and in LOVE with this story! T.T
im DYING to read the next chapter!...what will happen between yuki and shuichi?!
something tells me that im going to cry when they finally do get back together...(i cant wait for that to happen!)
i do hope that you will update soon!
i really cant wait to read the next chapter! ^.^
person fujinakaheero
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A new chapter finally! w00t!
oh, not trying to sound rude I promise.
I've just been checking here every time I'm on the computer to see if a new chapter was added or not.
It was quite a sad chapter, you did well in conveying the emotions though.
I hope to see more eventually and when I do be ready for another review by me!
gah I love this series!
You're doing so well with writing it.
..sorry, I've been in my house for the past 3 days sick, I needed a little excitement.
person daxemon
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just discovered you. I read the prequel and now I am reading this the sequel. You gave me a scare there when it seemed that Ryuichi was going to date Shuichi. The fanfic is so awesome. I know real life can suck, but hopefully I won't be tormented for weeks on end waiting for an update, but don't worry, I am now a loyal fan and reader. Looking forward to the continuation. Keep up the good work.
person Kaiken
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It's been a long time since I've found a fic this good. I love it! I spent the whole day reading the first story and the chapters of this one...I can't wait for more. I'l be waiting eagerly!
Kaiken
person KakashiSanzo5790
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!
thats all there really is to describe this story...! ^.^
im sorry that i havent reviewed for a while.....i have been reading each and every chapter though...and eagerly anticipating the next! ^.^
so just becuase i dont review every chapter doesnt mean that im not reading!
i love this story so very much!
i cant wait until shuichi and eiri get back together though!
i hope you can update soon! ^.^
person fujinakaheero
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woot! Another wonderful chapter even if it was kinda short.
I love the way you're developing the plot to this, that's probably why I cannot stop reading it. <3
really good though and I cannot wait for the next chapter to be posted.
So until next time,
ja ne!
Fujinakaheero
person mystice
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your stories are really interesting, i can't wait for the next chapters to come out...

hmm... i hope some events in the dream happen to shu again... like being wooed by ryuichi...

and how about rick...? I wonder what role he'll play in this 'real world' fic now...

poor yuki, he's clueless as to what's going on in shu's mind...

so, will shu leave yuki or not...??

only you got the answers to those! pls update soon! ; )

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