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August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... just wow. i love your writing style and the little things that go unsaid are just screaming for my attention. i do love this fic and hope you conntinue it sometime son.
DJ
DJ
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November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well written and true to the characters. The dialogue between the Elites seems carefully crafted and how I would imagine it being. The metaphors are very fitting and thought out as well; they seem to put things in perspective and emphasize the difference between Tanagura and Ceres.
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do love your take on the spunky Riki - and for picking it up again after all this time. Thanks so much!
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really really enjoyed this. You have such an excellent flow to your writing, it just pulls you in from the first sentence. Also, you captured the balance between Riki and Iason perfectly and illustrated just how tenuous their relationship is. I especially enjoyed Riki just asking Darryl to hold him - Riki's pain was just so palpable that I truly felt for him.
And the conversation between Iason and Raoul was exquisite. You have a great talent. *applause*
And the conversation between Iason and Raoul was exquisite. You have a great talent. *applause*
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Going through your collection of writings, and I love a good fanfic of AnK, so had to read it.
I like how you put the thoughts behind the anime images and then added your own details. I always think that that anime was incomplete, too much left out, those 3 years of taming just a few seconds on screen, so i like where this is going.
I like how you put the thoughts behind the anime images and then added your own details. I always think that that anime was incomplete, too much left out, those 3 years of taming just a few seconds on screen, so i like where this is going.
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was... Wow. owo''
I haven't dared to read any Ai no Kusabi-stories since I read Taming Riki, since I didn't want to spoil the image it had given me. But for some reason, I ended up reading this now, and I have to say, I don't regret.
You have a special way of writing, that makes the text more than a text, and keeps your eyes on it until it ends. Perfect, just perfect. Maybe me laugh and made me cry, especially the second chanpter and the intense feeling that was there.
I hope you keep on writing, I really do. n___n
I haven't dared to read any Ai no Kusabi-stories since I read Taming Riki, since I didn't want to spoil the image it had given me. But for some reason, I ended up reading this now, and I have to say, I don't regret.
You have a special way of writing, that makes the text more than a text, and keeps your eyes on it until it ends. Perfect, just perfect. Maybe me laugh and made me cry, especially the second chanpter and the intense feeling that was there.
I hope you keep on writing, I really do. n___n
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this. I like it a lot. You've kept everyone beautifully in-character and shown the change from lust to love well. I hope you'll update soon, and email me when you do so I can read (and review) the next chapter.
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July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh wow! For some reason, I thought that you had decided to stop this story. But I'm glad that you are continuing to write. This is great!
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
W.O.W
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why you haven’t updated your story AK-Abduction. It is really great and it would be really a loss if you don’t finish it