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Oh - this is wonderful writing.

I love how you captured (created?) the growing relationship between Iason and Riki. The despair, the concern. Iason's recognition that breaking Riki completely would destroy what he found so attractive to begin with.

The scene with Darryl was so very touching. Wanting to be sympathetic, fearing Iason's anger - and gratefully receiving Iason's permission to be caring.

Also like how Katze became somewhat of a mentor.

Actually - liked the whole bloody thing!!

I Liked your story a lot, I always wanted to read som good ANK fanfiction and I was lucky today. I really hope you keep going with this proyect. As other reviewer said, I like the complex relation between master and slave, and I think this person is right... The master can have the power over the slave's body, but is the slave that has the power over the other's feelings, I mean the slave doesn't have to be in need of the master, but obviosly te master needs this guy. It was interesting the way you created the situation wich both characters met.
For suggestions, I'd incorporate Raoul in the story.
And.. I'd like to, but I've haven't seen yet... What if, for some reason, the roles between characters or society changes?

I really enjoyed this. I'm very interested to see whether and how Riki's feelings for Iason change, how their relationship develops after this. I hope you continue with it. Thank you.

Hey, kiix , lovely fic. I have just finished reviewing Cake (one cool story) and checked your profile for more works and Wow! AnK! Wonderfull. I'll tell you honestly that I don't read much of Anime fanfiction due to poor quality, but your's I did and was very pleased with it. Very realistic and well written.

Have you seen http://ainokusabi.atspace.com/
If you enter and proceed to Official part then some treasures can be found ;D

I always find myself drawn in to these types of stories, ones where the captured guy eventually becomes stronger than the master so to speak. For some reason, I have this fascination with seeing people recieve their comeuppance, and if anyone could pull off a good Iason/Riki story, it's you.

As for story ideas, I've always wanted to find one of these where the ~rapist/master/fairly bad guy~ actually has to work damn hard to get his ~pet/slave/prisoner~ to like him back. I think it'd be absolutely wonderful to read your story of how Iason manages to stoke Riki's dying flame back to life, much less how Iason actually manages to get Riki to stop hating him/have consensual sex (and perhaps even something where Iason tries to seduce Riki).

Anyways, I hope to see more updates soon (I mean, I hope my suggestions span no less than 20 updates please(j/k...kinda) :P).

I really like the way you write and tell a story. I love how Riki and Iason's characters are developing. Are you going by the ova's storyline where they die at the end? I hope it's a different happier ending, but you're the writer so do what you think is best. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Mmm....clues for the 1st anniversary right?
Well, maybe... something like a conspiracy between Iason and Daryl and in the same time between Riki and Daryl, both trying to surprise the other and Daryl going on crazy between so much secrets asking help again to Katze...
Or a really big fight between them and then kind of a reconcilation because they remember that its their 1st anniversary....

i dont know..... someone else has more suggestions???

OMG
I loved it!
Please tell me that you are going to continue with this fic!
I think that you kept the escence of each character. It was a nice thig to read. Hope to see more of your fic soon. I close my eyes and see Riki fighting above the moons of Tanagura and Iason spying him in the dark. That was my favorite scene. And Daryl, he is so cute. I hate when an author uses Daryl as a bad character humiliating Riki, but you kept him just as how I imagine him. And of course Katze, he is so... arrogant and Katze, just as Iason told him, "You are getting too familiar". You only left out Raoul, but perhaps you are saving him for a later chap.

Thanks for this awesome fic.
Gin

oh no, poor riki.. well, as long as everything..hopefully, turns out ok, i'm happy.. not that you can tell with those two >_>

Wow. I think you did an amazing job in exploring the weeks that the anime only alluded to. I can't wait to read more!