rate_review Reviews

Wow. The formatting for this is TERRIBLE.

That was very well written. I especially liked the grace with which certain things are omitted, that they are implied by the writing. Much of the fiction that I traipse through as a reader is clumsy with a heavy style that makes it distasteful. This was a pleasure to read, accurate and well-characterized. I commend you.

I liked it alot! It was very good, the only thing in wich I disagree is that Walter would be angry, I think that Walter´s profesionalism would not allow him to even have an opinionm about it (After all he lived with Integral's father whom is told that had very liberal vices)

Your first chapter of this story has certainly struck a cord with me while reading it that none of the other fics I have read so far. While one can see a few reasons behind why that Integra (tv series not the manga) would feel the need for such a twisted reverse role playing drama, when looked at more carefully they all come out as incrediably shallow and selffish. Then using Seras as the surrogate target takinig the place of Laura/Carmilla is even worse when one recalls that Seras was aware Integra was in danger way before Alucard was and moving to help her when Walter stopped her. Course being more then a bit of a Seras fan seeing the character in such anguish probably explains my gut reaction to this so far. I hope you do finish this as I'm keenly intereted to read more of it, if only because Integra has some explaining to do at the least. :)