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Oh MY GOSH!!! He just blacked out! UPDATE!!!

very good story jadeheart i am glade that you are writer more storys i love you storys and can not wait for more of the story. now that shucihi is back as a little boy. what is next.

I dont know whether I should hate you or love you, JadeHeart...KAMI...this is a f@#%ing awesome story!!!...Shimatta but I ran out of Kleenex in the second chapter, had to resort to toilet paper...had no make-up on, thank Kami!!!....hate it when mascara runs down your cheeks....please do not keep us (okay me) waiting too long for the next chapter....catti

*softly crying* Wow. While you can tell something is off by the fact that Shuichi never answers. At first I thought he was just away on a tour or something. It isn't until Tohma shows up that I realizied it was something much deeper. Great job.

cry love it and i read all your storys and can not wait for the next chapter of this story . is shuichi is come back as a ghost or in a other person . so eiri will not be along

Ack!!!! You better write more!!
You can't leave it like that... Please???
I will be waiting.

Wow. That was truly heart breaking. The only thing that kept me from actually crying was the fact that I am in the library at school and I don't like to cry in front of people. I was not expecting another chapter. The first one had me guessing till the very end what was going on. And this one was as I said before very depressing, especially at the beginning and again at the end. In the middle, I started feeling a little better and then...BAM! Gesh. Anyway, I loved it.

KAMI....I hate you....that was so f@#king awesomely (is that a word?) angst....and me with no kleenex and snot dripping on my keyboard!!!!!....F@#king Kami I cannot wait for chapter 3...but I will have kleenex by then...or a roll of toilet paper...How do you clean snot off a keyboard?...LOVED IT....catti

Why!? WHY!? ... So sad... It made me cry at the end. That was your intention wasn't it!? Wasn't IT!? To make me cry out in emotional pain for him. Throughout the whole story I had this feeling that something was missing, or wrong if you will, and then near the end BAM! I knew it. I feel like total crap now... but in a god way, that means your story was good... But I still feel crappy. I think that this one was better than all that I have read... Well, the stories of Shuichi dieing and such. You made it really believable. I had actually no idea as to where the hell you were going with this and I sat there reading thinking, "What the hell's going on? And why isn't Shuichi talking?!" and then I slowly came to realize that it was a trap! A devious trap set to lure us in and shatter our hearts and minds to pieces. Well I hope you're happy. You've succeeded. I'm in shambles. SHAMBLES I TELL YOU! Good story though. But I didn't like it, it made me cry. I have to go redo my make-up now. Damn it, it takes me long enough already, you know, and now I have to completely take it off and put it back on. Forty five minutes I could have used doing something else but NOO!!! Well... It doesn't matter now I guess... But all in all it was worth it in the end. Great job. ^_^