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This story's getting stranger by the chapter. I have no idea where you're going with this. But I'll definitely read any new chapters.

Well, at least you've continued. Hmm, not what I would have expected, but I suppose it works. I do hope she talks him out of leaving again, it'd be a tad repetitive at this point. Also, when revising the previous chapters(I'm rather glad I took the time to re-read them both as it has been over a year since I last did so...), you still haven't added "Prism" between "Moon" and "Power" in Usagi's transformation phrase. The only time she ever transformed with "Moon Power" was when she was using the disguise pen, which is an utterly different itinerary altogether. But aside of that, looking good, and I await chapter 4. Laters.

Really nice story so far. Will Ukyo and Ranma become senshi? After all, the new planets in our galaxy need their senshi too ^_^

Interesting start to the story. Want to see more, soon if possible.

Only gripe I have is Ranma going ronin over Akane's *food*, for crying out loud. Not the multiple engagements, the blackmailing, the emotional torments, the physical groping or Ranma's honor being used against him by people who could barely spell the word - the food?!?!?

That and the Amazons - they would not give up so easily. Ranma's name was annonced on the news - they'd be showing up soon.

Looking forward to more.

An interesting forst two chapters. It should be a very interesting ride. Now, I know you've probaly already heard this, but when the Senshi transform, Moon should say either "Prism" or, given where it seems you're setting this(between the Aliens/Doom Tree[Makaiju] arc and the Black Moon arc or between the Black Moon arc and the Deathbuster Arc), "Crystal" between "Moon" and "Power", and the rest should be saying "Star" between their planet names and "Power". Also, the only attack of Mars I know of with the word "Celestial" in it is "Mars Celestial Fire Surround", also known as "Burning Mandala", a wholly different attack from what you described, which is just "Mars Fire Ignite" or "Fire Soul". Just saying. Well, look forward to chapter three. Laters!(Will Sailors Uranus and Neptune be making an appearance, per chance? Cours, then Usagi's second word would need to be "Cosmic"...)