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wow... I remember reading this earlier, but now that i've had a chance to re-read it from beginning to end I have to say that I keep falling in love with the way that you weave a tale. It was brilliant and sad, I started crying at one point... Truly a wonderful piece of magic... I hope that you keep up the splendid work! lol Now I'm off to re-read everything else!!

-Krystal-

I haven't finished reading this story yet but i really wanted to voice my opinion. It is a real shame that this story, or any of your stories for that matter, have so few page views. You are one of the best writers on this site. The way you describe things makes it very clear to the reader what you're trying to portray and doesn't get tedious to read like it can be. I feel that you also have a mastery of character development that I rarely see on this site. I hope you don't get discouraged by the little response you get. I am one of your biggest supporters and will continue to be so!!

they kissed! ah, touma, you horny bastard XD

I didn,t read this story. Before I start I want to ask if it is pairing Tohma&Ryuichi? And will I understand a plot without reading your previous ff about Eiri ans Shuichi?

I’ve been reading your writing since you make “The Key To My Heart “ and I like it very much. I’m glad to you decided to make this side story. Actually I always wondering, why on earth a full grown up man, almost reaching his forty, still carrying a stuffed animal and talks to it. Not that I find it uncute or something. By reading your fiction, I think I can understand the possibility. I know you must be pretty busy, but please update soon.

I read all 10 chapters this afternoon.. What an excellent story, engrossing, well written. If there is anything more, I would love to read it.

it makes me shudder. i guess i'm not into this kind of scenario, but you know i like your style, the realistic feeling and your interpretation of the characters. this story gives real background to ryuichi's personality and his attachment to his bunny. and i think it's in true fanfiction spirit - while murakami usually plays the funny side, most of her characters have a dark side or trauma to deal with. as i said, i get affected by cruel descriptions easily, and i'm very relieved that they have an end here! at least i hope they have, or at least that ryuichi et al will be spared to any further gruesomeness in the future. (though i wonder whats going to happen between jim and his wife. there's still something to come, isn't there?)

(i couldn't remember my password on ff.net, so that's why i'm reviewing here)

I very nearly started balling when Ryuichi was finally found. When he kept asking for Tohma's reassurance about Kumagoro...your writing never ceases to draw out emotions. I kept yelling at my computer, much to my roommate's amusement, that he wasn't dead and to not give up. Thank you so much for updating. I am looking forward to the continuation to this story. You are a truly amazing author.

thank god they found him. *shudder*

As expected I loved this chapter as well. When I saw that you had updated I was so excited. I can't wait for the next chapter. Great writing!