rate_review Reviews

This was written well. Just the word Wish. there is no h at the beginning. Just thouht you should know. hehe. All in all I loved the story! ^______^

Re: Nameless and the review.

While the "Nameless" reviewer was very rude and has obviously forgotten his or her manners, I noticed the mistakes he or she mentioned, as well. It's not a matter of Word- you can't trust Word, as it will often tell you to change something in a way that will make it incorrect. It also doesn't correct you when you spell a word right, but use the wrong word (like when you used "breath" when you meant "breathe"- both were spelled correctly, you just picked the wrong word). You also jump tenses occasionally, which can be very jarring.

Betas and proofreading can not be replaced with Word alone. And if this isn't your native language, it's even more important. Excellent job, btw, writing a whole fic in a language that isn't your original. That's something most of us couldn't do...

So, besides the usage mistakes, it was a cute little PWP. Sanzou was a little OOC, but not by much (I've seen far, far worse), so it didn't really bother me. I do hope you'll keep writing, and that my advice will be received well and didn't upset you.

i loved the story. Sanzo was lovely ;)

Wonderful, well written--especially since English isn't your mother language. Also, the interaction is very real.

This fic was written so very well, it just flowed and you could just go right along with the movement and feel like you had been ****** , too. Now if I just had someone too cuddle with i would be one happy camper. English may not be your first language but sex is definatlly your first language. Hot, Hot ,Hot....and so very sweet at the same time which you don't find often. I really enjoyed this fic and put it on my re-read list. You know the one where you just got to have a "good" fic to read. After thiinking about it I think you need to had out cuddle-buddies to go along with the fic. Great Idea hun?

nice, hot story. keep up the good work.

*reads all the other reviews* How can you possibly take some of those seriously? OMG SQUEE!! Update or I'll die? God..I think some 12 year olds were reading your fic and got pimples. Maybe they didn't remember it's ADULT fanfiction. *shakes head*

The story itself was ok. Not good. Just ok. It was pretty sappy here and there. I did manage to read the whole thing. I think if you do write more. You can do better. I look forward to see what your going to do with this.

Nice spelling mistakes. *snorts in disgust* Doesn't ANYONE spell check anymore?

Seriously though. Do please spell check next time. It makes it a better read.

This is just lovely - makes me yearn for a rainy day. And a kappa....

YAY!!!!!
this is DEFINITELY a fic to read and reread a thousand times over! ^.^
i absolutely LOVED this fic!
im extremely sad that its already over though...T.T...what can i say?....i love my gojyoxsanzo yaoi! ^.^
anyway....loved it!...love you for writing it!...youre a kick ass writer!...cant wait to read more fics from you!
hope you write more soon!
~KakashiSanzo5790~ ^.^

YAY!
OMFG!
thats was soooooooooo fucking awesome!
i love this story sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!
i dont want it to end...not yet anyway.....*sighs*..T.T
youre such a tease though...god...it was just getting good! ^.- (lol)
well....i cant wait for the last chapter.....im absolutely DYING to read it!
(sorry im such a pain in the ass! ^.^)
please try to update soon!