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Oh man, you're killing me! This is an awesome story and I'm glad you do still do update.

Stupid stupid stupid! Yuri your so stupid!

I want Gwendal's head on a pike! Yuri you boob! you can have his head on a pike! you can do it! your the king! just...a ...few...words....and...*slapt!* no one will ever pull that ever again!....you'll just have to deal with the possibility of civil war......OK fine! no Gwendal head on pike....You can always strip him and put him in a spiked barrel and dragged behind two white horses? no? red hot iron shoes.... make him dance to his death?....OH COME ON THATS A CLASSIC! At lest think about it when your coming to judgment over the humans who tryed to rape and kill your family! Nothing says "DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT TRYING IT AGAIN" like a fairy tale death sentience. Oh wait! You won;t even get that far cuz your a moron who doesn't learn anything from his past!

I have a feeling that these unknown villains want this war started.....for some unseen reason ....

I'll wait for the next chapter just... don;t forget!

I think I love this story more and more with every new chapter. I was reading so slow because I didn't want the chapter to end. The waiting is torture! Promise you'll continue this..even if hell breaks loose..and please finish it (although I hope it's not any time soon) This story is just too damn good to be left unfinished. Thank you for updating! :)

At the beginning it almost seemed as if Yuuri was cursed what with his bursts of uncontrollable anger, but now it seems as if the others are the ones cursed. Yes, talking with Big Cimaron (sorry I spelled that wrong) does nothing. It never has. But going to war will accomplish nothing either. And Wolfram is right. They don't know who is behind this. It seems more like it is someone from the inside more than someone from without. But that's just me. And I think Maoh is right. Yuuri needs to get his cowardice ass back home where he belongs.

X_X You have made me go through so many different emotions while reading this, haha. This is one awesome and well thought out story. I like the slow paced romance going on... or not so much romance, but the fact that they aren't just, bang, together. You are actually making me get mad at Yuuri though, hahahaha. Never thought that would happen. Anyway, can't wait until the next chapter. Thanks a bunch for witting this. xD

Oh God..that was such a depressing chapter! My heart broke..i really hope that yuuri will understand..please update soon, Im looking forward to your next chapter! 8D

“Albert Einstein once said, ‘The world is a dangerous place, not because of those who do evil, but because of those who look on and do nothing.”

Oh, but Albert Einstein was also a hardcore pacifist. Do your research, Murata!

I read this story a while back so my review is going to be sketchy in why I love it but what is important is that I DO love it :P I clicked on your story because I was looking for soppy Twuwuv which really doesn't have any in character moments and normally results in a male pregnancy (I think I'd just been watching Les Mis or something) and was (pleasantly) surprised that the OMG! MALE! WEDDING! FIC! wasn't a OMG! MALE! WEDDING! FIC! One thing I liked, personally, was how because we mostly all love Yuuri/Wolfram I wanted them to marry but god can you put an omen in. As soon as Wolfram made the promise to not sign any war declarations I knew something would happen, but not in a bad way. It wasn't 'predictable' but more just had this underlying suspense. Your fic made me happen.
And you like deprived us of pretty much any action, which was brilliant frankly cause it's realistic. Yuuri wouldn't suddenly say "you know what, I think Wolfram is quite sexy, let's have lots of animal fun"- but then you had the Near! Rape! Scene! and I don't know about you, but rape scenes are often very underplayed and made sexy. Yours had the affect a rape scene should have, I was like "NAAAO" the pink nightie probably had the best affect for me, something so innocent with something so O.O

One thing that really interested me though was how when people call Wolfram a whore he just seems to not deny it at all when he hasn't even done more than bloody snog him. Are they deliberatley putting up an image that their marriage is more than it is so the public doesn't suspect it of all being a.... conspiracy against the king I guess.

(Much luff- cause I luff it)

Sweaty Scotty

Ohh lord that toke me forEVER to read.... many sleepless nights cuz of you! such long chapters too, but thats alwasy good.it was Put togeather all lovely. LOVE this story its in one of my top must check to for updates list! i love the whole plot! everything and i would love to go into detail over all i enjoyed but i'm very very sleepy! all i have to poke at is that i had to skip a few paragraphs just cuz i felt like parts where going on and on about the same thing they just talked about in the last chapters or in fact... in the same chapter...

but i realy realy realy enjoyed it soo much and i want soooo soo bad for the next chapter~!!!!

OMG I can't believe you're back!!!! I'm sooo happy. Thank you!!
This was an incredibly tense chapter. I loved reading it and I am at the edge of my seat waiting for next chapter.
I didn't know they were making season 3!! How great is that!! Please don't take so long to post next chapter!!