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for Love and War

by Mikagechan

person White_Youkai
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Please, more, more, more! Update as fast as you can! I loved the conversation between Wolfram and Greta. Really good chapter. (I would like some more action between Yuuri and Wolfram though ^_^ But that's only my wish) Well, good luck writing the next chapter! Ja, ne!
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for posting the new chapters, I love this story but you know that. thanks again for posting it
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yet again, you have succeeded in reducing me to tears. That was a good chapter. I didn't mind that Yuuri wasn't there mainly because he had somehow started to become an increasingly frustrating character (I swear to god, he needs to declare war or at least do something more concrete regarding the attacks being done to his country), and also because I just love Wolfram (his angst, pain and situation with Yuuri can produce so many wonderful fan fictions...the possibilities are endless =P).

Keep up the good work. I'm loving the story and I hope you update real soon. I'll be waiting! (And I'll be waiting for things to start and heat up between them two too ;P).
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Thank yo so much for updating! Got happy when I noticed. I got myself an account so I could review! Great chapter! As I said previously, I think your writing is excellent. I like that it is fluent and eloquent. Really enjoy reading it. I feel so much for Wolfram!! Love your portrayal of the characters. Please continue!! Pretty please with cherry on top?
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story today and I have to say its completely brilliant! You're very good with describing the scenes and the emotions the characters are feeling. There are times when I can see the scenes playing out in my minds eye and thats really awesome. I do feel that the story would have taken a similar turn to what you depict. Yuuri would have had to open his eyes and see that not everyone wants to talk or are willing to listen. I can't wait to see how he handles this situation. I really feel for Wolfram, his pain is so palpable. You can honestly feel it as you read and i wish he could get what he wants. I love how you the complication presented by their relationship. They both need and love each other, but in such different ways that it inevitably leads to pain for both of them. I'm just stunned by how good this story is. Keep up the good job:D

Thanks
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
For once I don't know what to say and this is a good thing....This is a great story, it took me two days to read the chapters that you have posted so far, I am sure the others will be just as thought provoking as these were. But, it does sadden me to think this is what our society has raised us to think. Love but not the same sex, your allowed to love just watch your age. We are taught from day one how to love, unconditionally. I thank-you for taking the time to write this and post it for our enjoyment though I do find it sad because you speak the truth in what you write. Thanks again I look forward to reading more.
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG...you reduced me to tears with that chapter. My heart goes out to Wolfram...just when he was given a peek as to what could be if Yuuri was able to reciprocate his feelings for the blond, Yuuri just yanks it away from him. I know that both he and Yuuri are just lost and confused, but Yuuri's starting to sound like an insensitive jerk. I know it's the fear in him, but right now, it's just Wolfram for me. I just want to reach out and comfort Wolfram (and it's not just coz he's a bishounen and that he's my fave character in the series). Poor guy...he's just so...lost without Yuuri. But I'm sure Yuuri will realize everything near the end of your story.

Anyway, very nice work. Nicely written, very well thought of. I'm telling you, this is one of my fave stories here at AFF. It's a shame you can't update too soon (although I'm still praying that you would and will be able too =D). Well, at least this will be something to look forward too every week. The anticipation of the moment...like Wolfram and Yuuri's situation.
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loving this fic! I like how realistic it is. Hoping your muse kicks in cause I can't wait for an update. ^.^
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, that was a great (and LONG) chapter. Keep it up!
person willar19
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just had to read that chapter again. i LOVE IT! reading it again made me realize how similar it is to our situation here in the usa. there are people who feel both of those ways. great job on writing it. you did such an amazing job at the wording. i am so impressed. well til you update again i'll just keep rereading your story. LOVE IT!!!! hope to hear from you soon, til then take care and dont get stressed out :)

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