rate_review Reviews

Kagura and Sakaki! That pairing is literally gold!

Can you do a Sakaki/Kaorin/Kagura threesome

Kawaii ina, thats awesome! Hnnn, this was good! Very yummy!

I'm thinking that the pill Tomo took will turn her, temporarily at least, into a herm. Otherwise, why would you need more than one pill?

This was a little perverted to say the least, and somehow I told myself "they are of consenting age".

I'm a hentai.

I can definitely associate with the difficulties that come out of writing fics in class. Quality stuff, man. Can't wait for the futa in chap 3.

Hmm, very interesting, I'll give you that. Not a real fan of Chyo-sex, myself, but then again she IS 13 by now, and I do read Evangelion lemons, and that series' female characters are 14. ;D I guess I like where this is going.... as for the next chapter, I think I already know...

That it's FUTA TOMO TIME?!

Very good stuff! I don't particularly approve of Chiyo-chan hentai, even Yuri style, (or the word "cunt", incidentally) but you can't really argue with results. I'll be interested to see where the rest of this goes.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but is this part of the omission series for hentai's story?

No, this is their own story. As much as I wish all other fanfics could revolve around mine :P

Long as I'm posting again, I may as well add to my review of this thing. I'm surprised more fanfics don't go off of the discussion Nyamo had with the girls. Maybe there are more, but they escape my memory (Mostly because I don't read outside the cluster of the ones listed here).

Ashura, and everyone else writing multi-part stories; don't make the same mistake I did. Be sure to read every part to make sure it makes sense. Of course, since you haven't added any original characters, but even if you do, try to ensure they're nowhere near as self-centered and random as mine did. -_-