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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting =D, well done.
Can't wait for more xD
Can't wait for more xD
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Overall, your story is very good and interesting. Yuki is a good character and somewhat endearing. About the only suggestion I could give you is this: some of the sentences are cut in the middle, and drop to the next line. I'd go back and correct this formatting error.
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!