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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Squeeee! OMG, that was so good. Poor Hatori, one almost believed Yuki's silken lie. Please write more with them or even just Hatori. You portray emotion so well!! As well as the lemony bits which were very well done and managed not to be the focal point too strongly.
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was beautiful, and actually quite clever and realistic. At first I thought it was odd that Hatori could be seduced so easily, but your explanation of that was rational. And I liked how Yuki was portrayed as seductive, but also innocent. Everything was done very well. Great job with this. ^_^