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You should definetly do "Fai wakes up thinking he is in Ceres."

wow... it's darker than the other fics i've read working this point, but there's definitely more story to it.

i'd love to read more, if you're not gonna update here, where's your blog?

Nya, I like 2-4 (definitely not 1! that's just too sad -tears-)

Wow, what a beautifully angsty story, I never thought about the 6 months they spend together in Yasha's camp, but this is awesome, the way you're filling it in. Well, I'm a total sucker for angst XD so I love it - please update soon, it's such a good story!

Very nicely done, so far! I am deeply impressed. You've got more guts than most authors in this fandom, on any site, when it comes to describing... that which some might find it uncomfortable to write. I consider myself at least a semi-competent torture-fic writer, and I certainly couldn't have done this. You keep everyone very well in character, which is nice, considering I feared a scarily compassionate and pseudo-psychic Kurogane. After some minor, inital errors, your grammar and spelling seem to be up to scratch too. I would love to see this continue. Please update soon.
~Lunasariel
P.S. I vote for option #4

Poor Fai~!T.T
I gave 5 rated for the rape scene!I like abuse and torturing,don't mind to write more!Your story..my mean,THIS STORY is attracting me and how I love the plot!^^
I'm an author from Fanfiction.Net using the same penname Feathery Fear,so please don't mind to check on my stories too!
About the 4 ideas for the 6th chapter,I think I want the last one.It's better if Kuro-pippi know what's happening and MAYBE you can make him caught them in action!*fangirlscreams* That would be awesome!
I'm sorry I didn't review for every chapters because I'm lack of time and I got night class after this!
Great job and update as soon as possible!See you on the next chapter!

o: .. . . . ... DOOOOOOOD, KURO! C'mon, the clues are RIGHT there! They did rape-Fai baby, they DID! C'moooon! SDKLFJasdklf ::pulls hair::

I love this fic. It's so evenly detailed, and I love the story line. As to the next chapter.. I think all of them are an awesome choice. XD So that's up to you, make it a suprise.

): Omg! Poor Fai! That's no fair, those bastards lied on him. ;A; Now my poor baby has to suffer! Stupid Kurogane, for not trusting Fai. Hmph.

I will go over there and SMACK Kurogane! ): Omg, poor poor Fai! I want to take him and hug him and cradle him!

nooo! you can't end it there! gah! i request that you bring this story out of hiatus soon. this is the best fanfic of their time in the Yasha camp and so thusly you are required to continue it ;) heh.

as far as your question as to how the next chapter should start, they all sound awesome. but personally, i'm all romantic and stuffs and I like number four, the last one where he wakes up, but is too sleepy to care as to why Kuro is there. i can just see him snuggling up closer to him and being all content -which it would play in perfectly with him calming down at Kurogane's touch in his sleep. maybe after the innitial snuggles are over and he wakes up more, then you could throw in him sitting up and looking at him funny and wondering why he's there. it'd just be a shame for him to wake up all alone ;.;

but i love it. you're weaving this story wonderfully and giving it the detail 6 months seperated from the others would definately require.

and i like your idea of their eyes slowly turning black.

but poor Fai! i wanna snuggle him and make him feel better. But Kuro can do that; and he can protect him to top it off, so that's way better ;)

please continue! i'd be a shame for such a well written and well plotted story to end entirely. we need more writers like you! i'll be lurking and waiting for an update ;)

~Melissa the Damgel

I love you stroy but i was just wondering, are you going to update the story anytime soon caus eit such an ammazing story it would be really disapionting for it not to be completed. Anyways once agian I love the story and hope that it is soon continued, oh and for the next chapter beging i think you should go with number 3, Fai ...not knowing where he is, but wondering why he's in bed with Kuro