schedule
February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have good material to work with for this fanfiction. The one thing that majorly rubbed me the wrong way was that it's exceptionally dark. A lot of people have different tastes but I thought as the reader that you could of held back a bit more when it came to the whole torture component, and Fei's helplessness. Besides those two things I felt you had a pretty decent story and characterization for your characters.
schedule
January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I saw this fic in fanfiction.net and I liked it ^^ For a next chapter I'de like Fye waking up thinking he's in Celes. Your story is so good and so angst I can't wait for more chapters to come ^^
schedule
January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yah-ho! I'm the fiftieth reviewer!! Yay! I really hope you update, soon! I can only read each chapter so many times before I start obsessively writing 'update' on all the walls with my own blood! ^________^ just kidding, but seriously, update soon, please!!!
schedule
January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bitch, when you gonna update??
schedule
December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh wow no matter what one you choose I can't wait to read it! Please update soon again! Your fic is so well written and flows so perfectly- something that fanfics lately have been lacking. I'd love to read more soon!!
~Ice~
~Ice~
schedule
December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Guess I would favour choice number 4^^
looking forward for an update!
looking forward for an update!
schedule
December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I definitely don't want Fai waking up alone especially after all he's been through. I'm leaning to #3 'cause Kuro can then calm a frightened Fai and ask him what's happened, how he got those bruises.
More than anything, I want PAYBACK!! Kuro has GOT to have revenge against those bastards that hurt Fai! I suggest whippings, red hot pokers, and anal clamps...^^
More than anything, I want PAYBACK!! Kuro has GOT to have revenge against those bastards that hurt Fai! I suggest whippings, red hot pokers, and anal clamps...^^
schedule
December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update?
schedule
December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Number 2!!
schedule
December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think Fai should either wake up alone, or wake up not knowing where he is and wondering why he's in bed with Kurogane.
Please update soon!
Please update soon!