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Ya this one was bit more brutal than the one on FF.net. 8 on eplict and 6 on the violence. Poor Fai! Kuro can be so dum, Fai can too. Update soon!

Oh noooo ;~; This is just too sad. I love your story and actually picked it up last chapter but I didn't get a chance to review until now. I'm not very into violent violent stories so this was definitely violent enough for me. I'm really sad that Kuro is so oblivious, though, since he's got an almost psychic sense for when Fai is hiding something from him in the manga. I hope he finds out soon because I can't take too much Faihate ;_; *wubbs on Fai*

It's a very interesting begining. It's interesting what's happening with Fai. Sure it would be hard for him to live in army - with his always smiling personality (soldiers don't like and don't trust people like that)
So please continue soon!!! Meow will impationally wait!!

Please hurry and write the next chapter! I'm so excited!!! This is a really good story- I really hope you continue very soon!!! Not only your writing style, (and I don't simply mean that you can actually spell, not that that isn't greatly appreciated), but also just your personal style- as I said, please update soon!!! I'll check everyday until you do, so the pressure's on! ;)

I love it. I really like where you're going with this (Yes, I'm evil to Fai) Can't wait for the next chapter!