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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you must be a dom...or maybe a very lucky sub...how well you gave captured a perfect spanking. I loved the line when Jin told Mugen that he WAS holding back. I also enjoyed how Mugen had to be held back from the frenzy the spanking had worked him into. Excellent depiction of play, thank you.
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January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What i like about this fic is the way you were including a lot of Mugan's thoughts, which were very funny and ic, i mean as much as he could be in this situation lol. It was kinda sweet in a weird way lol and hot. Jin..oh man..he was interesting lol "). A good pwp fic.
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, My , what a delisious Birthday present. Very interesting and so well written. Color me impressed and pop out the confette!
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! What an awesome birthday gift!
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kind of an unusual take on the characters, but I liked it.