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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For being your first fic, I've gotta say, I'm very impressed >w< <33333
It's well written, things make sense... well, beyond why Van'd ditch Hitomi after just four months, but I assume you'll be getting to that in later chapters...? =o
There ARE loose ends that make me slightly question the story, but again, it's most likely just because nothing's happened yet beyond Hitomi's infamous horrific visions (minus one kidlet one owo <3), so I'm not too worried about where things will go <3
That is, so long as you keep making awesomely long chapters that are total love ;3 <3
PS. THANK YOU for not making her return -all- "HOMGHITOMI~!SPAZLURVSPAZGIVEUPEVERYTHINGFORYOUSPAZ~!" like how most seem to be these days x___x;;; Let's get some semi-realistic reactions in those other Esca.fics! DX
It's well written, things make sense... well, beyond why Van'd ditch Hitomi after just four months, but I assume you'll be getting to that in later chapters...? =o
There ARE loose ends that make me slightly question the story, but again, it's most likely just because nothing's happened yet beyond Hitomi's infamous horrific visions (minus one kidlet one owo <3), so I'm not too worried about where things will go <3
That is, so long as you keep making awesomely long chapters that are total love ;3 <3
PS. THANK YOU for not making her return -all- "HOMGHITOMI~!SPAZLURVSPAZGIVEUPEVERYTHINGFORYOUSPAZ~!" like how most seem to be these days x___x;;; Let's get some semi-realistic reactions in those other Esca.fics! DX
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so good, I only recently found Escaflowne and managed to watch the entire series in a day, I was that hooked, this story just seems to follow on so well. Please update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens.
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwww I want more, it was so intreging i hope you bring more out really soon.
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy shit u better continue fast yup yup
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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm interesting start, this shows promise of something good later on, please update soon, I want to know what happens!
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh good. She's finally going where she truly belongs.
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yea I love that you are picking up where the story ended. I'm looking forward to new chapters. Your writting this very well.
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