rate_review Reviews

Okay, your chapter 2 made me cry. Kudos. Write some more please.

Hey, the plot is good, but familar. However, you space to much(Spacing large gabs will not give you longer chapters, your readers will be able to tell the length of the chapter anyway) also, You should find your self a Beta reader. This is a person who you send your recent chapters to and they profread them and correct them.
This story does have potential, and it would be a shame for someone to not want to read it, because its not frazed correctly, there are people like that, trust me, I'm one of them.
So, get your self a beta, keep the hitting of the enter key to at least a twice, and update soon.

Cheers
Crmy

Please don't leave it hanging... ::: pout pout ::: It seems promising.

really cool cant wait till the next one

Well, you have pulled up a very very large pair of shoes now lets see if you can fill them....if you do my hat is off to you and I will bow in gratitude.

more . the story sound real good and i think that the yound man mite be shiuichi. but you will now . but will be wait for more fo the story please write more and let me know what is goinog on.

I was actually in the middle of the chapter but sumthin made need to review. Aaliyah, an R&B singer and my inspiration to start singing, died just the way shuichi did 5 years ago. I just thought that was eerie. Ur story is fab btw ^_^

Good, I like it so far, update soon.