rate_review Reviews

Anybody who reads this, I was the author of this story. The idea came to me from a previous author on this site, a person I could not get in contact with. It's perfectly natural for a person to change emails or leave a site, so I never expected to hear from her. I wanted to continue her work, using my ideas, and I got no complaints. I am still writing this story, and I'll find a way to show the world how romantic this pairing can be. For anyone interested to read more, email me at lovely_neesan1@yahoo.com. All I ask in return is a kind review with suggestions for later chapters. Thank you.

GODDAMMIT, WHERE'S THE STORY? :(

uhhhh...i cannot see the first chap...was it deleted or sumthing? :(

uuuhmm what happened to the story?????

it's like... NOT there!

I don't get it.. where's the story?

I don't even watch this show (or heard of it for that matter) but great job anyway! Very sexy work! Incest is VERY wrong, but somehow you made it seem very sweet, loving, sexy, and "not" nasty. haha! Keep up the great work!

Although I preffer the original story, because of the glimpse it gave us on Touya's mind, I think this is a great story on its own. I hope you can continue it. I do hope though, you let us know a bit more about Touya's feelings, I'm just really curious to see that, and it's something not many people explore in fanfiction.
Anyways, I'll be waiting for more. You actually made me create an account so I could review this XD

I love this story...never stop writing.

Hello Neesan!
First of all I want to congratulate you for this fantastic history.
It´s very romantic and sensual, and, very very very very well written (and believe me, it´s very dificult to find someone who makes good descriptions of a (sexual) situation in this site, instead this is a especific site).
You´re very elegant in your written and I think this is very importarnt for a writer.
I hope you to update soon.
Best wishes,
dawitch

nice job finishing it up, are you going to continue? if so, i look foreward to it.