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This was different!!! I liked it!!! It was hot, sad, funny, all that good stuff. I would suggest getting a beta for the grammatical errors(or suffer the massive flames from the nitpicky people on this site), but other than that, this was a great story!!!

This is a great story. I really liked it. You do have a crazy mind, a crazy gifted mind. Keep up the good work.

This is written with respect for you.

"insalts?"

That would be "insults" I think.

Little things like this make the fic a very bad read. Why not get a beta? Why post such bad grammer and paragraphs? It looks to me like you spend alot of time fic writting but you don't care for the quality. A beta will help with everything. Please try one.

By the way...miss hissy fit.*lol* Since this is adult fanfiction I suggest you ACT like an adult. Writting such things on your summery will only make the assholes who hate respond. Ignore the nasty reviews and learn from the critical ones.

I am sorry. This is a very poorly made story. Bad grammar and use of language. I dont think english is your home language is it? I maybe think your are very young for Adultfanfiction.

wow ace the story is real good and i love the sex in the story to and i love the way that yuki was in the beng and then at the last chapter the y have three m i love it and can not wait for more of the story. be here waiting.

That was so crazy! I can't wait for more, so update soon please

LOL! That was such a great chapter! I love it when Yuki gets protective of Shuichi. Update soon please! I like your story very, very much!

Good read so far, but the grammar is killing me!

That was so great! I have a question though, was that the end? I love! Bye!

That was so intense! It was HOTT, SEXY, And WOW! I can't wait for more. Update soon!