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I love it!!!!
This has a twist that i have not encountered within other stories,
and i have to say that it interests me to no end.

I will happily wait for the next installment.

Wow! you have me totally hooked up! Wondering who Kira is...well, the church brings me to the Mello/Matt pairing, but I suppose they're not. I see Mikami is already working with Kira. I'm thinking Taro could be L, well, I thought so even in canon until proved otherwise. And the psycho hand-loving killer probably had one, too. Could he have survived somehow? What I'm really wondering is who Kira is menacing. It would be twisted (I am probably) to have Raito-kun thinking Kira is holding Taro and having Raito killing him instead (if he's truly L). Wondering if Taro/L would tell Raito who he was? Thinking Raito is/is helping Kira, probably not. Ok, I'll stop ranting now. You are great!

This good. Just read the whole thing.

awesome story, I hope to read more.
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Gasp! I can't wait for next chapter!! Super duper curious to see what happens next. I'm curious about the eyes the most myself. If you are going to have Ryuuku*SP* tell Raito about them. Or if you are even gonna have them. Oh well. Please do update though. Really good story!!!!!

Nice nice nice~ I like the riddle you put in there and the thoughts running through Raito's mind when looking at Ray's shoes.. X3 Made me kind of giggle despite the situation; you would think he was going to steal them what with the mentioning of a retail price. On the note of what the reviewer above me (Or somewhere up there) I understand where's she's coming from, since most authors would skip over the mange bits and get straight to their own twists, or only brief it. But, I rather like how you take the time to go over the original Death Note chapters; it really gives you an insight on the differences, however slight, in Raito's personality. Like how his emotional and physical reaction to Ray's death was way different from how he reacted in the manga, showing that his innocence is still retained and that he isn't going into god-complex mode as fast as he did by himself. Though, I must admit, I am rather eager to find out more on Kira, I don't mind the wait and, as I think I said before, I rather like being able to compare the original manga chapters to this one. ^-^ Thanks for updating and I hope you work out whatever is going on at home! Keep up the work! :3

I'm not to pleased with your version of Death Note. I enjoy the back story and the evil little Tarou, but the whole thing is following the main story. There are small variations, but no real subtantial change.

Oh.. I loove this one. X3 -Just finished reading the story- Personally, I liked it better from Taro's POV compared to Raito's, probably cause I've already dubbed him as my favorite so far though I haven't read this Death Note one-shot. Anyway, I have yet to figure out that riddle, I don't even know where to start.. >.>; But, I will continue to try! :3 Keep up the good work and update soon!

This is a most amazing story. I am unsure of whether or not I have reviewed before, but a response is past due. First of all, I love how you've transformed this story. Not to mention, I hope you do well on your career path. I love reading your Author's Notes. I have been reading this story since it was first posted and can truly say it is one of the most interesting Alternate Storyline story for Death Note as of yet. More riddles and mysteries for us, your devote readers, is much looked forward to, is all I can say. Keep it up.

YES! We finally got an update! I LOVE IT!