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SHE LIVES!...SHE UPDATES!!! OMG! hurry w/ another update plz?

This was absolutly amazing! An ingenius way to write a story I am waiting to see what you have in store for us next!
-Kimmi

This is really interesting....
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That means you need to continue, you know.
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Addicting...

Wow, that's a very interesting story! I really truly wasn't expecting to like it when you introduced angsty original character Taro, but you stick to a very solid description of his emotions (like, they're not horribly contradictory to the character you've projected for him). So yes, I really like this story! Please continue writing it.

(Just for the record, because I forgot about it in my reveiw, yes I did read that part where you say, Taro is the "main Character of the Death Note one shot and is therefor NOT an OC". However, that really doesn't mean anything to me because I am uninformed, and don't know what that is. So, in my world, Taro only exists as your original character. Regardless of the details. XD sorry. I still like your story though. )

O_O it's so interesting! zelly wants to read more, but there isn't any more. uwaaah! *sadness*

This is a pretty awesome story. There are a few things that make me wonder, however. This diary thing was never mentioned before the incident of discovery, and it seems to me that something where Taro records his secret thoughts would be watched after much more carefully. I would think he would have kept that at home...and please tell me Yagami is just trying to be a people pleaser here as that seems sort of sudden for him to just completely dismiss him like that. Then there's the occasional spelling error, but that happens. And finally, when does he get the death note?! I neeeeeeed to know. Please keep writing this story it is muy excellente!

I just read your story, and I find it to be really facinating. I wonder if you would please continue this story as soon as you have time. Thanks

That is so cute! I love how you've portrayed Sayu in this, it's really sweet!

I look forward to the next chapter