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o_o never thought of it this way... but then...

damn, the comparisons are amazing. of course, knowing CLAMP they probably did it on purpose. =D

wow! i've never read smut that encompassed so many emotions that had so little to do with the relationship. this is beautiful - the smut, the introspection, and the chara study!!!

Wow, that really was an incredible trip - reading this two-part writing on Kurogane. I really, really enjoyed your take on him and his relationships overall. I have been thinking about the connection between Kurogane's love for his mother and his current love affairs recently and this really hit it dead on. I really loved the writing style, the round-about-analytic narration, and the portrayal of the KuroFai relationship. It almost makes me hesitate when I work on my own current KuroFai fic because of the similarity of the subject, but hopefully I can get around it because I don't it to seem like I'm copying or something. Love your fic! I hope to see more of your KuroFai writing if possible!

awww u did a awsome job!
Its was well written and had a nice plot. I hope u plan on writting more fics. There arent enough dedicated to this couple

Wow. This is just a beautiful fic. Sensitive and subtle, something that honestly speaking, I didn't expect to find here. I love the way you described how the two of them interacts, how they don't need to speak much yet understand each other so well. It makes the fluff in me swoons and tears. ;___; Do you happen to have a LJ with this posted? Definitely a story to put in my memories.

I just like this. Kurogane's past is so sad. It's right Fye looks like his mother. They are fragile, they use magic... I read and review next chapter.

omg... that was...beautiful. you have such a wonderful way with words. i felt like i was drowning in this work! great job!

Awsome job. I love this fic. Its well written and fun to read

it was a good story, very beautiful and also interesting..